2 Women

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Jun 14, 2012.

  1. Two women
    my heart, my sole
    two women
    my way, my goal

    the only one
    which my child could talk to
    all soft desires & pleasures of faith
    my silly confusions, my fears of fate

    the only one
    that me could listen to
    guide my directions command my deep
    my selfless hide my dreamless sleep

    two women
    between their call
    could have stopped but they tore it all
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    i din't understand... Please bother to explain... I'm dumb..
     
  3. its simple its about 2 women in my life
     
  4. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    Same here....Infact i have always thought that poems which are difficult to understand are the good ones.....I liked what u wrote..but sadly couldnt link anything :(
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    2 women.. could be i think umm..wife and mother? m a y b e ...
     
  6. very close Nandy !!

    Women have a way of messing with a mans brain :p
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    yesss!!
    i get it!!! but ask me to explain i won't :p:
    its a simple clear poem..i think ..
    your poems are written with the simplest of words..yet the meaning is so deep and thought provoking..
     
  8. Vader

    Vader New Member

    props for last para
     

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