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    Manzil se ghoom gayee..

    Thanks for your comment..... i just wrote it to break my dormancy period... it have prolonged for quite a long time.... i think it did the work...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Dec 10, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Manzil se ghoom gayee..

    Here is a new poem I wrote yesterday... Tune jo pukara to.. Manzil se ghoom gayee.. Mand-mand purvayee.. Jiyra hilor gayee.. Nanhee se...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Dec 10, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Posting after a long time..

    Posting after a long time..actually i think i posted something some days before but that was old stuff,here is something new.. how is it? :)...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 30, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    ek shaam ho bheegi see

    Hey.. how is this.. i thing the first stanza is strong but i am not sure abt the others .... Ek shaam ho bheegi see… Aur yaad teri aaye.....
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 21, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    karz..

    I think the thought process is good...but somehow the word selection and rhyming scheme make it too juvenile....the thought holds much scope...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 16, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Kyon...

    Kyon… Kyon tumhari aankhon mein.. Aisi ajeeb veerani hai… Jaise bahaar ke mausam mein… Koi avaraa phool bevajah .. Kumhla gaya ho.. Kyon in...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 6, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    till this Game will be game !!

    Great lines....
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 6, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    baavri...

    Thanks guys...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 6, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Dard ka mausam

    Thanks guys... Monica... ur couplet is brilliant......
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 6, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    A voice in the dark

    Thanks man...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Nov 6, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Dard ka mausam

    Meri barbaadi ka saama ho chala hai, Ishq ab aur aasa ho chala hai. Kuch us shakhs ka jadoo hai ajab … Aur kuch ye dil bhi nadaa ho chala...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Oct 11, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    Bahut udaas lagta hai

    Bahut udaas lagta hai.. Yun hi dil ka dukh jaana, Yun hi khud ko samjhaana.. Yun hi har baat pe jhallana.. Din ka chupke se dhal jaana.....
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Sep 27, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    A voice in the dark

    Thanks everyone for encouraging me.special thanks to those who gave their time to read the poem and give their valuable suggestions.Thnk u guys..
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Sep 27, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    A voice in the dark

    Hey,I wrote this poem a couple of days ago...I dont know if it is good or what... but anyway,here it is.. Some make plans for everything.....
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Sep 21, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum
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    baavri...

    Pee kee lagan mein baavri, Baavree re… naina milae, naina churae.. khud ki hi chaya, se khud lajaae.. dhun hai ki kaise, pee ko rijhae.. saanvre...
    Post by: Ali Yawar, Sep 13, 2012 in forum: Poetry and Lyrics Forum