Bistar se darwaze tak kidki se aati piili dhoop dheere dheere hi sahi pahunch jarror jaati hai phir bahar jise hum ghar/room/ flat kehte hain uss ke paar na jane kitne gharoon main na jaane kitni duur deewaroon per peedoon par paani par.. mine bus ek din unn hi dhaayi kadam aage badh kar khidhi khool di aur meri khidi se aanhe vaali dhoop chalne lagi
ur observation regarding things to which others won;t even pay attention to is amazing.. that's another b'ful one... its always a delight to read your poetry..