Dhoop

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Oct 6, 2013.

  1. Bistar se darwaze tak
    kidki se aati piili dhoop
    dheere dheere hi sahi pahunch jarror jaati hai
    phir bahar
    jise hum ghar/room/ flat kehte hain uss ke paar
    na jane kitne gharoon main
    na jaane kitni duur
    deewaroon per
    peedoon par
    paani par..

    mine bus ek din
    unn hi dhaayi kadam aage badh kar
    khidhi khool di
    aur meri khidi se aanhe vaali dhoop chalne lagi
     
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ur observation regarding things to which others won;t even pay attention to is amazing..
    that's another b'ful one... :) its always a delight to read your poetry..
     

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