kehte hain nagmon mein yaadein qaid c ho jaati hain panahon mein rehkr unki hmesha k liye unhi ki ho jaati hain aisi he yaado ki yaadon mein hum khoye baithe the uss din meethe se kisi nagme mein inhe pirona chahte the shayad taare gin gin raat akeli thi bilkul..hmare he jaisi chaandni se khafa khafa c baithi thi kagaz liye soch rahe the hum bhi..dil mein ik baichain c parchhai baithi thi likh he rahe the hum k kalam aapka naam likh krr shrma c gyi hum muskra diye zara sa to laga jaise raat bhi chandni sang jhilmila gayi gungunane lage hum..sunaya nagma taaron ko pohncha door talak kahin chho gya ped awaron ko aap tak bhi pohnchega to zarroor shiddat se paigaam bheja hai gaur frmaiega hazoor yaadein itni saari hmare chhote se nagme mein sama to nahi paayi hain par fir bhi gungunaega zarroor kayi khatti meethi yaadein ye saath laayi hain.. i don' like the last line at all...if anyone has any suggestions..id be more than glad to accept..
accha likha hai ( par bhuut accha nahi ) .. actually kuch bhi nahi likha hai ... ye bus words hain ...
accha likha hai ( par bhuut accha nahi ) .. actually kuch bhi nahi likha hai ... ye bus words hain ...jalte diye ki lauu jaise, jo bus hian kunn ki ek baati jal rahi hai ...na rooshani ki tarah faile huee na baati ki tarah simate bus utne hi.. jina mann kare, bus tab tak hi jab tak mann kare .. na bujh jane ki fikar, na jal jaaane ka savaal ... na havaoon ka darr na andheroon ki bandish ... ek chaah jise bus chaah ban ke rehna hai ... ek vakaya jise kisi se kuch nahi kehna hai !!
ummm..agreed.. but i do want to do something with it..i mean..umm..make it better ..change lines..there is a theme..! but the problem is i can't explain ..
ahaa...that was to complete the minimum 10 character requirement...but i didnt want to say anything more...lol