Our Mortal World

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sukriti_hats, Jun 3, 2010.

  1. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    ummm...i've got nothing to say......

    OUR MORTAL WORLD

    How beautiful this world is
    Full of happiness and sorrow
    How cruel the creator of this world is
    He wants us to become an archer without using bow and arrow

    Flushed with excitement and vigour
    I rose my head up in the sky, but something I had forgotten
    That everything in this world is mortal
    Just like an apple which was fresh but now it has rotten

    One more time it happened to me
    I looked for a medicine to heal my wounded heart
    And I found it too but I couldn’t see
    That it was 1407 km apart

    Unaware of my capabilities I tried to shorten the distance
    But I couldn’t touch it ever, only feel
    And so relieved I was when I realized
    That my wounded heart will finally get healed

    But damn I had forgotten that this world is mortal
    And I had forgotten that the happiness is short-lived
    I had forgotten that the medicine was too far
    But still I expected the result to be long-lived

    And now the blue sky above my head
    Seems like it’s vanishing
    And now the silver ground beneath my feet
    Seems like it’s tarnishing

    Again my wounded heart has suffered from injuries
    Again I did something that made my heart break in 2
    And now I know whether it’s happiness, success or a friend
    All good things always come to an end
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    'tis so real......so nice....i feel the same.....:(
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    really nice one...i second horsemouth...nd i cud connect to it...wonderfully expressed...
     
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    ^good lines :)
    never give up, I'd say...
     
  5. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    its painful..why r most f da ppl sad these days?? is it the summer??
     

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