Good poem garima... why not change "Jo kabhi khatm nahi hota" to "Jo kabhi khatm hota nahi" to maintain the rhythm
Anytime buddy ...... @Pamposh....guess i answered that question...thanx for reading @Metal_fan...Marathi?? : okiee...& yea...All the best for ur Exams.... @Amit...Thanks yaar...m too tired to mk any corrections to it...wud keep that in mind cos this aint gonna stop here...m gonna continue it... @Madhuresh buddy....i absolutely agree with u that therez nothng new...but wat poetry is all bout?? evrythng that we rite bout is same...therez nothng new...its jus depends how it is presented in different ways.... ^^^*my opinion*
