hum jo unhe unke gahr se uthane gaye dheere dheere paoon rakhee shirahne gaye itni massomiyat se vo mere khaaaboon main gum ki bura sa laga kunn jagane gayee jhootha address diya sacchi tanhaee ko faasale jab unhe, doondh-lane gaye... naam kisi ka bhi lekar ke kar lete baat par vo khamosh rahe, pehchane gaye... mujhse khelo nahi khel keh deta hunn ke abb bachpnoon, ke zamane gaye.. hum jo unhe unke gahr se uthane gaye dheere dheere paoon rakhee shirahne gaye itni massomiyat se vo mere khaaaboon main gum ki bura sa laga kunn jagane gayee........... :
bura kaho, bura samjhe... bhala khao bhala samjhen ... tumhi kaho ki aaye dost iss khamoshi ko kyaa samjhen ???
Its good,but I prefer your English works...and sorry I didn't reply to it,I read it a long time ago but I never like to be the first to reply/comment/appreciate a poem..
again accha likha hai.. in fact bahot accha likha hai.. oops.. even i got ur habit of inserting english words in hindi !