zakhm

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, May 24, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    zakhm phir se kured kar lahuluhaan hua hoon main,
    katl karke insaniyaat ka haiwan hua hoon main.
    ankhon ki woh sanjidagi ab raas nahi mujko,
    waqt ki bewafai se yun pareshaan hua hoon main.


    aasmaan ki unchhai se gir kar sapne bikhare ab,
    jinko har pal tootne se bachata gaya hoon main.
    manzil ko paane ki chahat dil mein liye
    raah mein hi loot kar banzara hua hoon main.

    zakhm phir se kured kar...

    har baat pe mehfil mein rushwaayi ka sabab banke
    kuch yun is tarah se thukraaya gaya hoon main.
    roshni bhi ab umang nahi bharti zindagi mein,
    andheron ki saazish ka ab shikaar hua hoon main

    zakhm phir se kured kar...
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    jab koi naya zakhm kahya hai tera chera har baar yaad aaya .... ye puri gazal ban di app ne ....Ek baat kahuuun, yaha sab se jyada consistent banda hai tu..HAHAHA main bhi sala kya kya kehta hoon tu bhi saala kya kya likhta hai.. main lavazon se tera yaadoon koi purana nata lagta hai...
    ye saare stanzas jo app ne like hain uss main ek bahut saksham shayar bale hi na hoo parantu ek sudrin insaan jaroor dikhata hai
     
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    very good astro...like reading it...
     
  4. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    @amit..thanks for reading

    @madhuresh....well thanks for compliment.....
     

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