your smile girl... oh your smile...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by varmas11, May 5, 2005.

  1. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    some untitled love song i guess

    oh i still remember
    how you took my breath away
    i was just wanderin,
    hopin destiny brought you my way
    and oh what a beautiful day
    the sweet bliss of a sun ray
    and you caught my eye and
    i wanted to smile
    but shy i was
    and i wished to hide
    so i walked far away...
    into the settin sun and the wind

    i dunno why... i dunno how...
    i just know i love to see you smile
    you got my heart girl...

    but the sun came soon enough
    hope came alive
    to rise from the trough
    to the crest of your love
    i still remember
    i was just sitting there
    staring off into space...
    and i saw you there
    just a few steps away
    but i was shy...
    so i turned my head away
    but i was peekin and you took a step
    left and right
    slowly and softly
    through the night
    you came closer,
    i heard your breath...
    and i swear it was like
    a dream
    i was awakened from death...

    i could live in these chords forever...
    i could live so long...
    i dunno how to say...

    i dunno why... i dunno how...
    i just know i love to see you smile
    you got my heart girl...
    just smile girl... oh... smile...
    tears of joy... smile girl...
    oh lord... i dunno how to say...

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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice one!
    Any Music Directors reading this?

    Really nice.... no words to praise!
    Keep it up!

  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    WOW WOW WOW WOW !!!!
    lotz of reps 4 u :)..
    its a vry vry romantic poem.. :) luvd it.. nice 1.. keep thm comin :)
  4. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    haha thanks guys,
    really appreciate it
    i used to think that love songs are kinda stupid and silly as we should always be progressing on the path and quest of truth and metaphysics
    but there's nothing wrong with taking a break, breathing, and realizing the innocence that still flows in our veins no matter how old we are. love is simple and the greatest thing... also...
    this song is not out of context...
    there is a girl that i know... we'll see... i usually don't really 'like' girls but this one is special. i will let you guys know about it ;)

    keep feeback coming and plese check out my stuff in the indian rock forum

    much love,
  5. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Hey when i saw the title i felt it will be some corny, idiotic stuff and i was getting geared up to abuse you... But after reading it i found it cool... nice stuff dude(Though I hate Love and sh1t stuffs like that)

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