some untitled love song i guess oh i still remember how you took my breath away i was just wanderin, hopin destiny brought you my way and oh what a beautiful day the sweet bliss of a sun ray and you caught my eye and i wanted to smile but shy i was and i wished to hide so i walked far away... into the settin sun and the wind i dunno why... i dunno how... i just know i love to see you smile you got my heart girl... but the sun came soon enough hope came alive to rise from the trough to the crest of your love i still remember i was just sitting there staring off into space... and i saw you there just a few steps away but i was shy... so i turned my head away but i was peekin and you took a step left and right slowly and softly through the night you came closer, i heard your breath... and i swear it was like a dream i was awakened from death... i could live in these chords forever... i could live so long... i dunno how to say... i dunno why... i dunno how... i just know i love to see you smile you got my heart girl... just smile girl... oh... smile... tears of joy... smile girl... oh lord... i dunno how to say... -saurabh
Nice one! Any Music Directors reading this? Really nice.... no words to praise! Keep it up! REgards, Zooom..!!
WOW WOW WOW WOW !!!! lotz of reps 4 u .. its a vry vry romantic poem.. luvd it.. nice 1.. keep thm comin
haha thanks guys, really appreciate it i used to think that love songs are kinda stupid and silly as we should always be progressing on the path and quest of truth and metaphysics but there's nothing wrong with taking a break, breathing, and realizing the innocence that still flows in our veins no matter how old we are. love is simple and the greatest thing... also... this song is not out of context... there is a girl that i know... we'll see... i usually don't really 'like' girls but this one is special. i will let you guys know about it keep feeback coming and plese check out my stuff in the indian rock forum [www.soundclick.com/saurabhvarma] much love, saurabh
Hey when i saw the title i felt it will be some corny, idiotic stuff and i was getting geared up to abuse you... But after reading it i found it cool... nice stuff dude(Though I hate Love and sh1t stuffs like that)