Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Jan 11, 2011.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I thought for a title a long time, then came up with the simplest one... and its chosen carefully 'cause the one its written for might find it familiar...hope i find solace in writing this...

    It was a life, a dried, hard life;
    and no one could take me through
    No one to show me the light,
    no one else but you.

    A drop that fell from heaven,
    into my hands;
    Soothing my parched skin,
    taking me through difficult times.

    My life was yours, yours was mine,
    to be for each other, for all of time.
    A promise to you, I'll bear you no pain,
    when into mine, your arms were lain.

    Drifting through the glory you brought,
    too far I went, you I forgot.
    An instance of a crooked thought,
    and in a flick, your warmth was lost.

    I looked around, every corner,
    prayed for you to come back.
    In an instant my fulfilled life,
    had torn apart, revealing darkness.

    And the blackest day, no sun came,
    for your light, fell to some other name.
    My life passed before my eyes, I knew;
    it was the moment that I lost you.

    No matter how much I wish you to stay,
    its a price for a choice that I must pay.
    And though you won't be here to see,
    my love for you can't wither away.

    And in my last moments of living,
    in your arms I'd rather lie.
    So what if I couldn't live with you?
    I'm for you, for you I'd die.
    And to you I write this sulken rhyme,
    for in the next life you shall be mine.
    Spirits from the sky shall guide me,
    for you, this, and my next life shall be.
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    nice always.. ;) :)
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks nandita... :)
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    looks like a heart break...both of your last two poems...but truly amazing...i almost cried...i hav felt this before feel like dying...
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    awesome man... hats off to you... i wish i cud write half as good as you.. bravo !!!
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Thanks dude!
    But You do write as good...just that you write a totally different genre....which requires change of writing style...mine is contemporary..

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