You in my life !

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Jan 26, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I must be seriously bored to have written 3 poems in less than 24 hours !! :RollLol:

    Ohk ... this one ... holds a lot of meaning to me... now i completely agree with people who say.... words can hold a lot more meaning than they are intended to !!

    The person for whom its meant for... will read and know for himself.

    You enter my heart as a colourful spring
    And blossom my Life with the joys you bring
    In the desert of life you came as a blessed stream
    And gave new meaning to my ideas and dreams

    Without you, they were dull and devoid of colour
    But you decorated them with your love and grace
    You taught my heart and soul to speak
    Without you they were lifeless
    As my passions and emotions had no speech

    Today without you they flow out of my heart
    On paper and you become an art
    By the waves of time the emotions aren’t as strong
    But you shall remain as my own
    When I will rest in the bosom of soil one day
    You will keep me alive forever
    In the words, to the people you will say.


    Ok... now... how was it?..... should i look for some other alternative for doing away with my boredom? Be honest and blunt... I prefer it that way :)
    zoomingrocket likes this.
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Do springs creep?
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Good point !!... dunno wat was i must be the boredom taking toll !!
    done the correction
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^lol, it must have been some kind of poetic imagery, i was kidding, nice poem :grin:
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Maybe the poet in me was thinking like... jis tarah... spring suddenly aa jaata hai... dheere dheere chupke chupke...
    but nevermind !!

    Now i ve changed it...:)
  6. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^lol, atleast someone listens to me *searches papers for a job as a poetry critic*
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You are hired !! ;)
  8. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    And instead of payin you.. you will have to pay me for hiring you... in terms of reps :)
  10. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Great use of words .. I think i don't need to say anythin more :)
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You say it best when you say nothing at all??.... i know i know !! :)
  12. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Another Good One!
    Keep it up...

  13. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nice poem! better than the other english one...
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks @zoom and cryptic !! :)

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