I must be seriously bored to have written 3 poems in less than 24 hours !! :RollLol: Ohk ... this one ... holds a lot of meaning to me... now i completely agree with people who say.... words can hold a lot more meaning than they are intended to !! The person for whom its meant for... will read and know for himself. You enter my heart as a colourful spring And blossom my Life with the joys you bring In the desert of life you came as a blessed stream And gave new meaning to my ideas and dreams Without you, they were dull and devoid of colour But you decorated them with your love and grace You taught my heart and soul to speak Without you they were lifeless As my passions and emotions had no speech Today without you they flow out of my heart On paper and you become an art By the waves of time the emotions aren’t as strong But you shall remain as my own When I will rest in the bosom of soil one day You will keep me alive forever In the words, to the people you will say. .................................................................................... Ok... now... how was it?..... should i look for some other alternative for doing away with my boredom? Be honest and blunt... I prefer it that way
Good point !!... dunno wat was i thinking...lol.... must be the boredom taking toll !! done the correction
Maybe the poet in me was thinking like... jis tarah... spring suddenly aa jaata hai... dheere dheere chupke chupke... but nevermind !! Now i ve changed it...