Hi guys, Here's a new song I wrote. Let me know of any suggestions on how I could make it better: Young boy meets pretty girl Offers his heart and half the world She obliges, lights his face with a smile They share a laugh and share a cry Promises, secrets and confessed lies Hopes their love stays a forever while - Now they're building their eternity - Brick by brick everyday - Making plans and certainties - Not knowing what ahead lay - Fretting over future fears - Regrets of yesterday - Your life may last a hundred years - But now you can only live today - Yeah, now you can only live today Finally the big day came He takes her hand and she his name The preacher pronounced them man and wife The love grew strong, times insane Few months of time and some pain In his hands he held a whole new life - So they're building their eternity - Brick by brick everyday - Making plans and certainties - Not knowing what ahead lay - Anxious about the future years - Regrets from yesterday - Your life may last a hundred years - But now you can only live today - Yeah, now you can only live today Love is tender, love is kind But its only hurt it leaves behind So when he decided to leave her for another - She's rebuilding their eternity - Brick by brick everyday - Changing plans and certainties - Not knowing what ahead lay - Anxious about the future years - Regretful yesterdays - Your life may last a hundred years - But now you can only live today - Yeah, now you can only live today
