Yo dudes/ladies new song from me

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by getshorty80, Oct 12, 2006.

  1. getshorty80

    getshorty80 New Member

    Yo Dudes And Ladies New Song From Me!!

    hey guys i have done a demo of another new song please do check it out. Its a bit RAW but just wanted to put this out. will work on it to give a better version. But need ur comments.
    this is the link to the page. the new song is called "Burnin rubber".

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=608302
     
  2. getshorty80

    getshorty80 New Member

    hey guys!

    yo dudes whats up. Please do check this reocrding and tell me if its any good. thanks in advance
     
  3. jake_e_lee

    jake_e_lee Banned

    the rythm section is ok,and u seem to be trying to work out a melodic theme which is cool..keep at it and u will get better.
    after a point it became a drag..and the solos didn't help either.
    it was messy and i felt u had no idea what to play over the progression.
    thats where phrasing comes in and u seem to be overtly influenced by joe satriani..im not saying its a bad thing but ive started hating everyone who tries to sound like him..pool in other influences and try and get a style happening for you.
     
  4. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Hey, thats got a nice rok-n-roll feel to it. Reminds me of carcass (swansong) a bit but nice song. Please dont add vocals to that :I
     
  5. getshorty80

    getshorty80 New Member

    thanks guys

    Oh yeh as i said the whole drum and bass lines are from the Summer song(obvious influence of satrianion this song). i know it gets a bit of a drag at some places but its just a demo. I will put out a decent version soon. thanks.
     
  6. jake_e_lee

    jake_e_lee Banned

    ^^ lol..u nowhere mentioned that the drum and bass lines are from summer song..hehehe.
    neways..post the final version sometime.
    will defintely give it a listen.
     

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