Yet another instrumental

OK here's another one by me. Its actually not fully finished cause i dont actually like the format/structure of this song yet and the rhythm tone just does'nt cut it for me. After the intro there's no continuity cause i cant really programme drums to fade in. It sounds kinda cheesy immediately after the intro but it gets better. And please dont ask me why i named the song "WHY" too many people ask me that. Its just a name forget about it. The intro just feels like "WHY".
Please let me know if this sounds too much like satriani. I wat to try to eliminate that.

Here it is
https://www.soundclick.com/sridhar

 

the feel is definitely satriani-esque, but i found some elements of good old indian music. tone's pretty good too. overall, nice work.

 

It IS Satrianisque.

The Rhythm feel makes it so, and the passages between, where rhythm is clean or rhythm is not there.

But anyway I like the musical composition.
Somehow it had that 80s Instrumental rock (mebbe cheezy :grin: ) feel to it.

Fast passages are nicely done.
However, on some slow passage, the leads lags the rhythm (or so I feel) ~02:30.

The wail note starting from 02:45, should have had stronger vibrato (either finger or whammy)

The fast section immediately after sounds fab. :nw: till around 4:00.
Not that afterwards it goes bad. :grin:

The part around 4:30 sounds little abrupt while slowing down. Dunno why.


The ending chord could have been arpeggiated. But I guess that would have sounded even more cheezy.

 

@alpha.....Thanks for the comments. If i could work with a drummer i'd probably be able to get proper continuity to the song. I'm getting rid of the ending (4:30>).