@Nimisha.....kewl poem....U really got that in a sec :nw: @Amanush.....dude u r goin great as usual....... really like ur poems...keep it up
@punnu... thanks very much... (yes, it was simple concept n not much work to adjust rhyme.. so it came in second..) @spy....sure i wud have posted that... but dammit!!! u already did.. :
awesome poem nimisha...i like it a lot...you are so talented...able to create excellent poetry in both hindi and english...some are good at only one or the othr...but yu do both very well...
ek second hi sahi, par aapne zindagi aur rishton ka bohut ahem pahlu uthaya hai. insaan kabhi kabhi kutchh aisay hi daur say guzarta hai, ki jis awaaz ko woh har pal sunna chahta tha kabhi, kutch waqt guzar jaane ke baad woh junoon zinda nahi rehta hai .ya yun kahein kutchh feeka pan sa aajata hai.tab hum keh dete hain ki haan humein pyaar hai, par uska asli matlab sirf itna hi hota hai ki mujhe tumhari fiqr hai.pyaar badal jaata hai sirf care mein ya shayad woh bhi nahi.........filhaal main isi daur mein hun, na jaane kyun par main hun. chah raha hun waapis usaay utna hi pyaar karna par nahi kar paa raha.kya reason hai pata nahi...............
@vishwaa... well.. that was a good joke..ha ha ha!! btw thanks for comments.. @koolstrum.. i think giving time is answer... the only constant thing in world is change.. so love also changes.. love goes thru many stages after developing the relationship.... trust.. care... complete dedication... crazyness... ups.. downs... n still u keep guessing how much u love that person... n u say yes i love u...(then feeling comes which makes u say)..but not as much..(then again change of mind n u say)..im crazy for u...(n again but not as such).. such continues... love is most critical emotion to understand on this earth... thanks for reading my poem n thinking it so deeply...
@nimisha.....good one ..T..............H...............I..................S....................M..........U.............C..............H..........good....he he @madhuresh......lol @first to lines @Amanush.....gud lines from u too @Vini......:secret: whoz the first one.????
