Yeh dil kissi ka ho gaya....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Dec 27, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    A new one for 'someone'......

    Kyu dekhta hai is chehre ko
    Jab yeh dil hi tera ho gaya
    Kyu poochhta hai sawal is mann se
    Jab yeh tere hi khayalo me kho gaya
    Khuda ki nazar tujh par bhi pare
    Or wo rog tujhe bhi ho jo mujhe lag gaya
    Zamana beet gaya sochte sochte
    Pata hi nahi chala kab Ishq tumse ho gaya
    Abhi to subah hui thi
    Or ab fir din dhal gaya
    Tum hi tum chhaye the zahen me mere
    Pata hi na chala din kab guzar gaya
    Ab to neend bhi na jane kahan gum hai
    Toh ab sapne bhi huye paraye, dil to pehle hi paraya ho gaya
    Darr lagta hai… bataye tumhe
    Yeh kya hua ‘na’ to nahi kaha tumne

    Par yeh Dil na jane kyu ruk gaya???

    Go guyz.......
    koolstrum and CrYpTiC_angel like this.
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    n this time, i could rep ya :) :)
  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ......... another good stuff 4m u ............ :)

    feelings.... when you fall in love ....... bt cant say(and i hate that .....)

    bt why u wanna spread the disease huh ??? :p: :p:
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^So that therz Love all around & no hatred..........
    Thankx Trish...Thankx Apurba
  5. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    I hate this ............ gotta spread some more .......... :mad:
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    somehow i REALLY liked this 1!!! i mean, i like ur other stuff too but i liked this 1 more somehow........
  7. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Good work... i liked it. :beer:
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    koi baat nai Apurba :) dont b angry :)

    @Trish....i kno y ;)

    @Suhas....Thanks man :)
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    I dedicate this lyrics to u..

    chupana bhi nahin aata
    jatana bhi nahin aata
    humen tumse mohabbat hai
    batana bhi nahi aata

    hatheli par tumhara naam
    likhte hai mitate hai )-2
    tumhi se pyaar karte hai
    tumhi se phir kyon chupate hai
    juban pe baat hain lekin sunana hi nahin aata
    humen tumse .....

    mohabbat kaise karte hai
    koi to humko samjhaye )-2
    kahin aisa na ho ki
    pyaar bin umra kat jaaye
    tum se milne ka koi bahan bhi nahi aata
    humen tumse mohabbat hai ...

    chori chori chupke chupke
    tumko dekha karte hai)-2
    haale dil sunane se
    na jane kyon darte hai
    kitna pagal dil hai mera manana bhi nahi aata
    hume tumse ...

    Trust me.. this is the worst phase of loving anyone.. i have gone through this.. and the only solution to this is to go and tell him/her.. if u continue this Trans state of mind.. only thing u will get dear is PAIN.. PAIN and only PAIN

    Vishwa :cool:
  10. shak

    shak Harrr!

    *sniff* i was dreading the turn that i got half way through your poem ... aah .. garry .. chin up girl!!
    ..... its really wonderfull no doubt about that .... wishing you the best ..
  11. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    cant rep you though.....:eek::
    neways.... really loved it Garima....keep writing happy-happy.....:):)
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Vishwa thanx for those lyrics....i just love that it describes my situation...but cant do anythng bout it....cant tell him rite now...mite tell him one day...

    @Shak....:beer: ur Hindi vocab is improving...glad to kno that:grin:

    @Hardik...thanx for those pair :):) hope to write happy-happy thru out...though it depends on the situation m i hope 2b happy & 2c evry1 i kno that i can write happy :):)
  13. koolstrum

    koolstrum The Chosen One

    My personal experience has been of a diffferent kind. Even I have been thru this one BUT I chose not to say, coz I went thru it once then twice for sum1 else and thrice for sum one other. So I initially tested my self that whether it was attraction or true love. I have got my answer. And I will make it more general. Its not a person or soul that you luv at this age. Its just the "feeling of LOVE (or loving sum1)" that you actually love. you gain a differnt perspective to life during different eexpereiences. This is one of them when you try forgetting the reality of life. ne ways I luv this feeling but I tend to sustain it. coz I luv it. But I have expressed luv to one girl in my life. n garima knows about her. well I hope that I do not sound a nerd to you people.coz I think I am not.
  14. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Youre actually ressurecting my interest in hindi.... (for the first time in about 9 years out of fifteen) :beer:

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