Yaqeen-my first recording (Comments plzzz)

guys i m new here so plz listen theis and tell me my mistakes
here is the link

https://as01.cooltoad.com/music/song.php?id=211981

 

Welcome to IGT, hope u'll have a good time finding the chords tabs etc.. here.
As far as ur cove is concernd .. nee practice on Vocals and i dun understand the chords ur playing man .. when i was learning this song i started playing it with asy chords such as : D : Em : G : A : thats it try playing on these chords get ur self use to it .. u can sing well too.

 

ok wrong forum should have posted this in the igt soundtrack forum

 

true .. the IGT sound track forum can promot ur stuff faster.

 

thnkx guys espacially bleeding guitar,im not promoting i m tryng to improve

 

sunny...u need practice..l..espicially theguy playing guitars. listen to the song ..sing/play along..then stop the song ...and sing n play (guitar+vocals) the part u ve just listened to.keep doing that until u work through the whole song.
Good luck, everyone starts of that way..dont be disheartened and keep at it and u'll be great.