Kuchh unhahi baatein reh reh kar yaad aati hain Ham duur jana chahte hain Par woh hamein baahein failaye aagosh me bulati hain Us aagosh me ham kho jana chahte hain Meethe sapno me fir kho jana chahte hain Par ye hakikat ki kadwi aahat har baar hamein neend se jagati hai Bohot din huye soye huye Arsa beet gaya us madhoshi me khoye huye Yaad aa hi jaati hai tumhari kabhi kabhi Varna toh zamana beet gaya roye huye Kuchh khatti yaadein reh reh kar hamein satati hain Ham unse duur jana chahte hain Par woh har jagah hamare peechhe peechhe chali aati hain Ham unse peechha chhudana chahte hain Un yaadon ko kahin dafn kar aana chahte hain Par ye hamare saaye ki tarah hamare sath hi chalti jati hain Bohot di nhuye kuchh kahe huye Arsa beet gaya tumhe chhuye huye Soorat tumhari aankho me basi hai hamari Varna toh zamana beet gaya tumhe dekhe huye Kuchh meethi yaadein reh reh kar hamein rulati hain Ham unhe sanjo ke rakhna chahte hain Par who hamse apna daaman chhudati hain Ham unhe gale lagana chahte hain Unko dil me basa kar rakhna chahte hain Par ye samay ki lakeer hamare beech ki dooriyan badati jati hai Bohot din huye tumhe sataye huye Arsa beet gaya muskuraye huye Yun toh nakaam koshishein karta rehta hai ye dil Varna hamein to zamana beet gaya takdeer se hare huye….. Memories ….. Good ones are always running away Bad ones always coming in our way That’s how life is. Hope you enjoyed reading…. Take care
i feel u r sinking back in same heart break theme.................i think its time for u to move on. nice one.
hi garima, nicely done but i do not know why but i felt it is too much verbose. effectiveness could have been enhanced if you have made it a little short. i hope you do not get me wrong so better i keep my mouth shut. good work in totality, so reps coming your way. regards, Souman
@Pamposh...i tk a lil more time to get over with anythng...i kno its bad..but thats how i am. @Souman...now i realise that...but when i was writing i found all those words so beautiful ...that i cudnt stop myself from including them here...& i intendedly made it lengthy...dont kno y :shock:... @Shal...thank buddy for always boosting the morale...the few lines i smsd u...were from this poem onli....if u remember... @Nimisha...thanks for reading...this mite not b the best...but is very close to my heart...cos this summarises our lonliness....these r the thots that come across our mind when we r alone....& "think" Thank you all for reading n replying.....:grin:
hey very nice poem..that was! i think we all have to undergo thru such things...i particularly liked the first two verses much more than rest of the poem...they were actually moving, trust me! good going..Reps!!
Absolutely Wonderful! Don't have words to praise U............ Keep Posting More of ur work...........
@Vini....Thanks ALot. @Sanjay....Thanks buddy I never look for perfection in my poems....cos the day i'll write a perfect poem...that wud b the last one...so, instead of that i wud prefer writing poems thru out my life which certain areas of improvement :
bahuut sare shabd hain..... par Bohot din huye soye huye Arsa beet gaya us madhoshi me khoye huye Yaad aa hi jaati hai tumhari kabhi kabhi Varna toh zamana beet gaya roye huye this is truly goodddddddd..
Hmmm... ! Bahout dard tapak raha hai aap ke iss kavita se...Garima Ji ! Life is like this...! The show must go on...isn't it ? Take care...ok ? Amanush...
^^ Thanks Amanush... Thats the same response I got from some1 else too...he warned me not to write these sad poems again...but then....i think i always end up writing sad...i remember saying that here Alot of times that I wont rite sad poems...but then...as they say "duniya gol hai"
