Aaj jab ..... Sooraj ne jag mein aankhen kholi, Chidiyon ki chunmun ne misri gholi, Bhor ne haule se jab li angdaayi, Tab....tumhaari bahut yaad aayi ! Aaj jab..... Main tanha, gumsum aur akeli thi, Zindagi lagne lagi jaise paheli thi, Milne ki bhi jab soorat nazar na aayi, Tab.....tumhaari bahut yaad aayi ! Aaj jab..... Din guzraa aur shaam dhali, Dil mein ek aas bhi pali, Jab haath lagi sirf tanhai, Tab.....tumhaari bahut yaad aayi ! Aaj jab..... Raat dheer dheere aur gehraane lagi, Apne hi dil ko main manane lagi, Teri hi yaad mujhe jab samjhaane aayi, Tab.....tumhaari bahut yaad aayi !
WAH..... sweet sweet.. Bahot sundar likha hain .. one of the best in IGT. each n evry line, tho my best are Aaj jab..... Din guzraa aur shaam dhali, Dil mein ek aas bhi pali, Jab haath lagi sirf tanhai, Tab.....tumhaari bahut yaad aayi ! ab toh yaad zaroor aayegi. Reps for sure n additional if i can give for ur siggy too . keep writing. sachoo
u know u could have made it superb...vo kyaa kehtain hain....i dont know the right word but i will call it infrastructure ....the infrastructure is very good....keep posting
^psst.. construction maybe nice poem akansha! reminded me of my poem on the same theme.. but its nothing compared to ur poem girl! this is wonderful
awesome...Akanksha....u miss him??:shock: oh....i know...dus ghante kaam bhi toh karne aana hota hai na :....
nimisha, agar isko compose karenge toh class 2 ki rhyme lagegi Sooraj ne jag mein aankhen kholi, Chidiyon ki chunmun ne misri gholi hehehehe : . hey garima, revealing her secrets :shock: ..bad manners :NoNo:
Bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ka.....Itni besh-keemati rai mashvira ke liye... Humko bahut achcha lagta hai jab apni mehnat ka halka sa rang nikharta nazar aata hai... It has been long that i have been able to contribute anything to IGT, but have not stopped writing....Will get back soon. IGT rocks!!!
