-Woh Chaahnewale- Ik roz jab mehkhaane khali ho gaye Kehne lage log kaha gaye sab chahnewale Galiyon ki khaak na naseeb unhe Bin asmaan ye zameen taqdir main unke Kya meh main doobna bhi gawara nahi unhe? Ashkon ko pina Faaslon ko jeena Mukhtasar hai unki zindagi Kyo hoti isme itni bandagi Jaise kabhi shab ko sehar na mile Kuch rishton ko apni manzil na mile Taluqaat maut ke saath kuch is tarah chahnewalon ke Mehfooz reh gaye sab jeene wale Mushkilon main hoti jab unki tanhai Ro-ro ke unka khoon bhi jal jaye Dil ke tukde jalte jalte Dard rooh ke sholay bana jaye Unke mugroor pyaar ko koi amrit bana deta Koi marne ki kasam dekar jeena sikha deta Un par koi har khushi luta de Koi har gum dhuen main uda de Pal bhar koi rishtain kayam ban deta To koi doorian aur badha deta Jab panapti unme ye chahat Kyon hoti hai ik ajab si ulfat Ye hai wohi chahnewale Khushyon ke dam par pal-pal bunti ek nayi kahani Har pal khud ko sambhale unki zindagani Likhi jati hai sirf....unhiki zubaani. ---,-'--<@ Do comment if u read it Good or bad...jus be honest dear.. Edit- My 500th post
I'm dig the sher from this line: "Mukhtasar hai unki zindagi" onwards...before that it seems to have a bit of a rocky start -arpi
awesome thought.... poem is bit scattered with thoughts... but every individual thought is just awesome..
I can just understand only these 2 lines (n they r good), read further with enthu... but where's the 3rd option Good, Bad, cud not understand.
