Its been 10days....since i was away frm IGT...wrote this one & a few more which i'll post too... Wo kehte hain ki ham hanste nahi Kya kare jab in aankho me khushi ke aanso baste nahi Wo kehte hain “kabhi yaad kar liya keejiye hamein” Or yahan haal aisa hai ki wo bhulaye bhoolte nahi Wo kehte rahe “muskuraya karo” Muskura bhi dete… Par hamein to us lamhe ka intezar tha Andaza tha hame ki intezar bohot lamba hoga Par sach kahein to us intezar ka bhi apna ek maza tha Wo kehte rahe “khush raha karo” Khush bhi reh lete.. Par hamein to bas unke izhaar ka intezar tha Dil unhe saupne ke liye tayyaar baithe the ham De bhi dete... Hamara toh hamesha se hi ikrar tha Wo kehte rahe “aansoo mat bahaya karo” Aansoo ruk bhi jaate Par yeh dil man.ne ko tayyar kahan tha Aakhir intezar khatm hua hamara Pata chala unhe bohot hamdardi hai hamse Or ham samjhe ki wo pyar tha : Thank You for reading....
hiii garima ........ again u rocks ..... nice poem......garima...... i jus love the way u end ur poems....... bye.... abhi
hmm shows k u were stuck at the same thought (khush raha karo, ansoo na bahaya karo, muskuraya karo) but nice way to answer every aspect beautifuly ........ but last three lines.......its ur feeling cant say anything but they twisted everything (kahani mein twist reps along with (FK) n (LK) : EDIT: spreading now......
@Apurba .... Thank You so much Thank You @ Madhuresh @Devilshly... Thank u buddy @Vini Thank uuuuuu tooooooooo :grin: @Abhi Thanks yaar @Khuram...ahem ahem...dint i tell u that m the best at these kinda twists :..anyway, thank u.....u kno for what...dont u??? Shukriya @Amit ji
One sometimes wonder why people always turn out diff than wat one thinks. nyway, wd stick to the thread.
