plz don't expect any happy poem frm me coz i write only when m sad...this one is another sad poem...i wrote it after doing sudarshan kriya lol...so all the emotions came out instantly...n i broke out...today only...n right now m afraid, sad, confused, tensed and happy for others...i dunno whether it's right to post such poems here but still m posting...so read WITHOUT YOU Shrieks, squeals, shouts and screams Are the noises that you can hear inside my mind Euphonic sounds can be heard only in my dreams The clouds are still dark with no silver lining behind Ray of hopes was only an evanescent rainbow Disappearing after a few blinks of one’s eye But I made it stay, didn’t easily let it go Absolutely unaware of the sin I was committing Some wrongs I did, some was your fault too I wish I could keep it undercover But my brain and my heart were quarreling too So I closed my eyes and claimed for total surrender You are my lifeline; I know you can’t be wrong But my peers also wish for my goodwill I can’t oppose them right now, even if I’m strong So I chose to give up and stay still Now I’m waiting for the world to change So that I can again hope to be with you A new day, a new life may seem so strange Because I’ll have to live it all alone, without you
Thats nice.... but not ur best... Also, I din't understand the 2nd para.. ...and without whom? anyone in particular? but yoga does have effects it seems ...i thought otherwise