hey guys.... this is my first cover.... hopeless vocals... but i gave it a shot... https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=684112
I know what I said sounds harsh but I think you need to work a little more before posting recordings for other people to comment on. I mean....you could yourself see what went wrong with this one. Work a little harder on your voice. You don't have to be great but you can at least stay closer to tune than you did. Also, make sure you have the chord changes down to a tee before you sing as that helps you concentrate on your voice better.
Rule of thumb is that if you yourself think the attempt is hopeless, then posting it online is probably a bad idea. You could improve yourself, re-record and post something that is halfway decent for feedback. You need to seriously work on your vocals though; it's pretty horrible right now.
