wish u good-bye

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Oct 23, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Still wish u good-luck, as i wish u good-bye ...

    i wish u culd read, waht i wrote on water
    i wish things wuld somehow, turn up to bring us closer
    Confess that i went, to see where the wishes go
    so as to push them, if possible any further

    Never gave-up so easily but 'my ways' i wont try
    Still wish u good-luck as i wish u good-bye ...

    This lane will be a free-way, many come many go
    if happen to pass-by, do hv a look in this window
    which shocases some stupid complications
    which defines our story but y i dont know

    Never had this feeling but it 'hurts' dont know why
    Still wish u good-luck as i wish u good-bye ...
     
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  2. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    For a moment I was enthralled you're wishing goodbye to IGT .. *sigh*
     
  3. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ ahahahahha

    @ madhuresh... hmmmm... didn;t xactly get wat ur poem was about :think:
     
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    i wish u cud understand somethng tht i neva said ot wrote to u

    i wish somethng cud hv happend to bring us closer

    i confess tht i evn tried visiting the place where all wishes go

    just to try if i cud push my wishes further so tht they cud reach there wher they r heard

    i hv neva gvn up so soon...but this is how i am...i wont try this time any further

    but i dont want to miss the chance of wishing u good-luck as u are goin away

    my life is like a free way lane...where many ppl come and they go

    if u evr happen to pass by...dont forget to look in into this window of my mind

    which is complicated in a stupid way

    but defined 'our' short story..dont know y..cos there was nothng to 'define'

    i neva felt this way..it hurts...i dont kno y

    dont want to miss the chance of wishing u good-luck as u are goin away

    ****************************************************

    ^^^^ this is how i understood it....let me know Madhuresh if its rite or no...

    i loved it this way...good one...may b the best frm u...
    reps coming ur way....
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    lol actually i didnt had any thing in my mind when i wrote this So how can i comment but its real pure crap....
    "Ooooooh - stop
    With your feet in the air and your head on the ground
    Try this trick and spin it, yeah
    Your head will collapse
    But there's nothing in it
    And you'll ask yourself

    Where is my mind....where is my mind.....WhEe Iz My MiNd....."
    <this is not mine
     
  6. hey tu ek pagal baccha hai ... actually ur in my category dotn knw how to write ...learn from others here..
     
  7. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Dont tell me that madhuresh doesnt know to write..he is one hell of a poet..leading this forum along with garima and lavina i suppose..too good dood..really felt the pain while reading the words...but only those who said gudbye may realise...for others its just another poem
     
  8. Morbid_Angel

    Morbid_Angel Sid the sloth

    Who made you a loser here?
     
  9. born2tab :even i felt the pain in my head while reading this stuff {ur born to tab not to read poems....haha}
    arnold :- who r u to ask me that ?
     
  10. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Ok monica:think: agreed that...par yaar itna gucha kyon???
     
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    **confused**


    arre yaar,, tere mind me kuch nahi tha.. to tu likhta kaise hai??
     

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