Still wish u good-luck, as i wish u good-bye ... i wish u culd read, waht i wrote on water i wish things wuld somehow, turn up to bring us closer Confess that i went, to see where the wishes go so as to push them, if possible any further Never gave-up so easily but 'my ways' i wont try Still wish u good-luck as i wish u good-bye ... This lane will be a free-way, many come many go if happen to pass-by, do hv a look in this window which shocases some stupid complications which defines our story but y i dont know Never had this feeling but it 'hurts' dont know why Still wish u good-luck as i wish u good-bye ...
i wish u cud understand somethng tht i neva said ot wrote to u i wish somethng cud hv happend to bring us closer i confess tht i evn tried visiting the place where all wishes go just to try if i cud push my wishes further so tht they cud reach there wher they r heard i hv neva gvn up so soon...but this is how i am...i wont try this time any further but i dont want to miss the chance of wishing u good-luck as u are goin away my life is like a free way lane...where many ppl come and they go if u evr happen to pass by...dont forget to look in into this window of my mind which is complicated in a stupid way but defined 'our' short story..dont know y..cos there was nothng to 'define' i neva felt this way..it hurts...i dont kno y dont want to miss the chance of wishing u good-luck as u are goin away **************************************************** ^^^^ this is how i understood it....let me know Madhuresh if its rite or no... i loved it this way...good one...may b the best frm u... reps coming ur way....
lol actually i didnt had any thing in my mind when i wrote this So how can i comment but its real pure crap.... "Ooooooh - stop With your feet in the air and your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it, yeah Your head will collapse But there's nothing in it And you'll ask yourself Where is my mind....where is my mind.....WhEe Iz My MiNd....." <this is not mine
hey tu ek pagal baccha hai ... actually ur in my category dotn knw how to write ...learn from others here..
Dont tell me that madhuresh doesnt know to write..he is one hell of a poet..leading this forum along with garima and lavina i suppose..too good dood..really felt the pain while reading the words...but only those who said gudbye may realise...for others its just another poem
born2tab :even i felt the pain in my head while reading this stuff {ur born to tab not to read poems....haha} arnold :- who r u to ask me that ?