why..!!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Nov 18, 2011.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i am writing crap and i don't know why
    i feel nothing and yet i cry
    i want to live but i need to die
    i am a preacher of honesty and yet i lie
    i have got no wings and yet i fly
    i am not drunk yet i feel high
    i never learnt to follow.but to every wish if theirs..i comply
    i have been dancing on the roof..all night long..and yet i am shy
    don't know whats happening..
    all i do all day is ..is to sit and wonder "why" !!
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    it aint no crap... nice lines...
     
  3. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    ... i'll tell you why.

    You don't have me around ... that's why.






    On the other hand - you are a human ... these things are normal, most humans are confused, and/or act confused and non-consistent.
     
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    @rickkyrich.. thnku. . :)
    @alpha1 .. yea rite.. haha.. :p
     
  5. good try ... ur lines take a crazy turns but in the end its a complete thing. liked it...

    Best lines : i never learnt to follow.but to every wish if theirs..i comply

    keep posting ur getting better day by day
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you monica.. ^_^
     

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