Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sharmontime, Feb 8, 2006.

  1. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    these i wrote one year back..

    why should my heart beat faster
    and louder when i see you?
    why should it?
    i'm not a criminal and
    you are not a cop
    neither did i lie to you
    never did i hurt you
    i know i owe you nothing
    then why does it still grieve
    with pain when i see you?
    My eyes fill with tears
    cannot understand why or
    what my heart fears.

    another one:

    never before i experinced so much pain
    perhaps loved you for no gain
    actually know this for the better
    expect nothing from love but love
    and in turn return nothing but love
    this is what i have done
    but you have gone
    leaving my heart alone.

    comments please....
    btw i am yet to write any poem this year. its been more than a year i wrote one.
    i have been postin my poems that i have written long back...

    love to here from you all ;)

    Sharmontime :cool:
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  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I ve heard it many times... No pain.. No gain
    But in love my friend... there is no gain... but just pure PAIN!!
  3. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    how shall i explain you? see....its like a choc that you feel like havin and are not given.
    you cry.
    you want something and you are not allowed to have that..you feel bad....right?
    but when you are given that...(ppl say...more often you get much more than you ask for...!!!) ..you simply like that..and thank a lot those who have given you....right?
    but still...even i too sense ...there's something lackin in my explanation..
  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Nah .. u got me all wrong ... Nevermind !!

    Well when u get more than what you asked for.. it isnt pain... but ... a feeling of being content.. feeling of being complete...having lived your dreams... your life to the hilt
    Its like.. u have it all.. and nobody can take it away.
  5. Aka Oz

    Aka Oz /\K/\ - Ozy

    hmmmmmmm good stuff
  6. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    In fact .....sometimes we dont expect any gain ;-)

    Good try Sharmon.... keep writing :)
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    someone wrote this line...
    my heart aches for you...
    key word here is 'ache'....
    wherever heart is involved... we r bound to have all kindaa aches...

    good words sharmon.. keep it up...
  8. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    @knight_ki_gf :
    actually i was explainin my plight and the cause of the pain (and my poem). but didnt do tht properly...and you have done that well.

    "Well when u get more than what you asked for.. it isnt pain... but ... a feeling of being content.. feeling of being complete...having lived your dreams... your life to the hilt
    Its like.. u have it all.. and nobody can take it away."

    :eek:: this is what i wanted to tell.n e ways lite.
    and i thank you for reading my posts and taking time to answer me promptly :)

    @ OZ : thanks for your appreciation :)

    @apurbajd: i agree. thanks friend. made me feel good :beer:

    @nimisha : yes dear. i experienced myself that a lot of times. sometimes it's as if my heart is strugglin to beat further ..and sometimes it's as if sliding down or melting down. it jus slips. :eek::
    and thanks a lot for you appreciation. i always wait for those from you. ;)
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Ur welcome sharmontime... anytime !!... wow now that rhymes too...lol
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    nice poem Sharmontime
    i liked the second one more than the first one..

    Do continue writing..:)
  11. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    thank you GF once again. :)

    thanks bubbly...n e ways i have to start writing again, as its been nearly one year i have written and wonder if i can write atleast as these ones are... :think:
    still i'll try writing and you all have to do tell me how they are. i am askin you all prior before postin my next one so that i'll know if shud continue now or not :p:

    love you all
    Sharmontime :cool: [TM]
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Lovely poems, i hope u'll start writing again...

    Even I'm going thru a no-poetry phase..... :'(
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    There's every chance that you might never start if you don't try to....I stopped since I felt that poetry was an outlet for emotions which I could direct into the music I play. End result was that I stopped writing and my music still has no soul and my emotions stay bottled up :'(
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^^ :Worried:


  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its not good to keep oneself all bottled up...
    things get all displaced if that happens.. :(
  16. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    writing poems = wasting time

    writing poems = wasting time
    i think its the most rediculous job for any sane person to do ..... but those who have been alredy been infected by the virus cant help doing so...
    YEs Iiiiii CAntttttt hellllllllllllppppp
    writingggg these words to u.......
  17. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    thanks a lot!!!i m glad that you like my writings.
    bjr and cryptic i shall try to compose myself and "get down to some serious work.".
    but i'll write not-so-soon though. have some papers to clear first.so it may take time.promise that i'll resume.

    but madhuresh...
    i wanna to understand what you said properly....pls clarify what you meant.

  18. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    wht happened?
  19. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


  20. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    yeah. bjr is true.
    but he did asked us to sit and start.
    thats what we shud do.


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