these i wrote one year back.. why should my heart beat faster and louder when i see you? why should it? i'm not a criminal and you are not a cop neither did i lie to you never did i hurt you i know i owe you nothing then why does it still grieve with pain when i see you? My eyes fill with tears cannot understand why or what my heart fears. another one: never before i experinced so much pain perhaps loved you for no gain actually know this for the better expect nothing from love but love and in turn return nothing but love this is what i have done but you have gone leaving my heart alone. comments please.... btw i am yet to write any poem this year. its been more than a year i wrote one. i have been postin my poems that i have written long back... love to here from you all Sharmontime
I ve heard it many times... No pain.. No gain But in love my friend... there is no gain... but just pure PAIN!!
how shall i explain you? see....its like a choc that you feel like havin and are not given. you cry. you want something and you are not allowed to have that..you feel bad....right? but when you are given that...(ppl say...more often you get much more than you ask for...!!!) ..you simply like that..and thank a lot those who have given you....right? but still...even i too sense ...there's something lackin in my explanation..
Nah .. u got me all wrong ... Nevermind !! Well when u get more than what you asked for.. it isnt pain... but ... a feeling of being content.. feeling of being complete...having lived your dreams... your life to the hilt Its like.. u have it all.. and nobody can take it away.
someone wrote this line... my heart aches for you... key word here is 'ache'.... wherever heart is involved... we r bound to have all kindaa aches... good words sharmon.. keep it up...
@knight_ki_gf : actually i was explainin my plight and the cause of the pain (and my poem). but didnt do tht properly...and you have done that well. "Well when u get more than what you asked for.. it isnt pain... but ... a feeling of being content.. feeling of being complete...having lived your dreams... your life to the hilt Its like.. u have it all.. and nobody can take it away." : this is what i wanted to tell.n e ways lite. :nw: and i thank you for reading my posts and taking time to answer me promptly @ OZ : thanks for your appreciation @apurbajd: i agree. thanks friend. made me feel good :beer: @nimisha : yes dear. i experienced myself that a lot of times. sometimes it's as if my heart is strugglin to beat further ..and sometimes it's as if sliding down or melting down. it jus slips. : and thanks a lot for you appreciation. i always wait for those from you.
thank you GF once again. thanks bubbly...n e ways i have to start writing again, as its been nearly one year i have written and wonder if i can write atleast as these ones are... :think: still i'll try writing and you all have to do tell me how they are. i am askin you all prior before postin my next one so that i'll know if shud continue now or not : thanks love you all Sharmontime [TM]
There's every chance that you might never start if you don't try to....I stopped since I felt that poetry was an outlet for emotions which I could direct into the music I play. End result was that I stopped writing and my music still has no soul and my emotions stay bottled up :'(
writing poems = wasting time @sharmo... writing poems = wasting time i think its the most rediculous job for any sane person to do ..... but those who have been alredy been infected by the virus cant help doing so... YEs Iiiiii CAntttttt hellllllllllllppppp writingggg these words to u.......
thanks a lot!!!i m glad that you like my writings. bjr and cryptic i shall try to compose myself and "get down to some serious work.". but i'll write not-so-soon though. have some papers to clear first.so it may take time.promise that i'll resume. but madhuresh... :think: i wanna to understand what you said properly....pls clarify what you meant. regards, Sharmontime