Well, this poem's very similar to my other poems, but here it is anyway... Why I wasn't supposed To die so young No tears in my eyes No emotions, I'm so numb No faith, no god No desire I may pretend But I'm not a liar I try to be strong I try to refrain From cutting myself From inflicting such pain I don't need to share I don't need a shrink But I myself don't know now What exactly to think Why such agony When I miss him no more I can't see any wounds But everything feels so sore Something's killing me But I really don't know what Will this be forever WIll I, forever rot? Somehow I can't cry And I can't even scream While happiness seems like A distant dream.
if i think of reading this poem any other time the thoughts would still be the same your good in pouring your heart into your words you always watch the brim and dont let them overflow... Nice work babe.. Tk care... **Hugs**
It was far too angsty for my liking...If I'm reading something like this, I prefer that the questions being asked be a little deeper. But, nonetheless, it was well written.
@bjr well, maybe i'm jst not deep, u know... i wrote whatever was in my mind at the time.. anyways, thanks @JJ thnx!
Everyone is deep....what most of us find difficult to do is explore ourselves at depth since, like in the oceans, the pressure tends to suffocate us psh, ignore me when I'm in these moods.
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! the best from you i must say! why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why cant i write such poems now a days?!why why why why whywhy why why why whywhy why why why why??????
^^^lol... thnx! maybe u should jst try try try try try try try try try try try try try try writing such poems!! just try try try try try try try try!! :RollLol:
yeah try try try! as bjr stated maybe i cant tap into my own depths and bring out a change in my poems! :
GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTt!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u rite REALLY well! THAT"S WAT I CAN SAY! ROCK ON !!!!!!!!!! :rock: :rock: :rock:
:nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: ......WOW.....EXCELLENT......B-E-A-UTIFUL.....i wish i could rite like u.......these were the exact emotions i had when i broke up with my gf ....(5 year relationship)... : ...in words!!! wish i could give all my reps to you.....angel :rock: EDIT: sorry if you meant something else from those lines....i saw it my way....
thnx a lot... and if u liked it the way u saw it, that's all that matters coz d poem has solved it's purpose for me already...
