This was the 1st song I wrote: WHY ------------------------------- The quicksands of time escape beneath my feet as I watch the birds soar in the sky the thin lines of horizon which seem to meet but never do so, and no one knows just WHY and WHY does the sunrise in the east and set in the west and where the birds go in the night and WHY does it pain when the one u love, is the one who leaves u and WHY do u feel as if nothing ain`t right If life is a roller-coaster ride then WHY am I going down If life is a mixed bag then WHY do I feel its just a frown if life is bliss then WHY do I feel its just a bane If life is a kiss then WHY do I feel all the pain... "Time goes on and on, It never waits", so they say, "after every night there is a beautiful day". "Love all", so the preachers say, "say no to greed say your prayers everyday and you'll get whatever u need". then WHY do I feel let down by the ones I really trust and WHY do I feel as though they'll just stab my back and WHY do I feel that the night ain`t no more blue and WHY do I feel its just full of black If life is a roller-coaster ride then WHY am I going down If life is a mixed bag then WHY do i feel its just a frown if life is bliss then WHY do i feel its just a bane If life is a kiss then WHY do i feel all the pain... If u like the stuph, then hear it out as well on my page: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=565809
Your Guitaring Skils are nice .. Country Side stuff is alwayz good to hear .. overall good song duder Reps on your way
Nice one again! Liked it especially the start. Ur user id makes more sense to me now reps follows edit: again that damn spread issue. 2 reps pending edit2: very much liked wordings. :beer:
Hey thanks guys....sadly i dont sound even half as good now...those adoloscent days... @SG1 - Country? I for some reason thought this was more pop/soft rockish (ok dont hit me for stretchin it - if Adams qualifies as rock, so does this!) @ Jozko & SG1 : Thanks for the reps guys! (pending as in case of Jozko! ) Therez this other song called Time Machine, which I never finished singing..has more meaning in it - shall post soon!
geniusoid don't you really find time to work on these songs anymore. It started so beautifully to me. nice lyrics. Heard thrice thought you could make it much more beautiful. you have excellent guitaring skills too. you don't want to try? You always talking of college days ) Any optimistic poems here by youngsters one on bright tomorrows? I have read deaths, SGs wars, and ur whys I donno how reps thing works. I had given u a rep earlier i am not allowed to give you anymore. Perhaps it might be enabled if u rep me, well for worst spamming i mean
Haha thts ok - i have no clue on the reps part either! Too lazy to read the rules too... reppin u - yeah i`ll try tht Well yeah I really dont have time after comin home frm work - but have been givin comparitively more time to just layman strummin if nothin else.... u gotta be clear of priorities and 6 strings cant pay me as much as my MBA does! )
^ no no, quit job u teach here, there are over 32000 members here. u can charge 5Rs from each a month , ;D keep rockin. will go through soundclick one by one after days spam.
thx aj, can't find 3 ppl deserving rep here. i gave one to genius, one to SG. gotto spread 2 more. ok will try. 2 reps pending to geniusoid. oh i forgot to rep bjr will do thx AJ
Hehe! if it werent for the kerala heat, i might have just taken ur offer....but job security mann!!! I want tht
^ i c u r in two minds u can do it from there not Kerala. I assure you that your job here is secured. Nobody teaching here is fired. btw Kerala is not a hot place at all, only movies are
Sorry AG, u deserve a lot for all the help. reps coming I never give. I learned in school that two negatives make positive
been listening to genuisoids fusion so the confusion. Dude said I use speech to text s/w. blame it on that. AG AG AG AJ ah works now three negatives makes a positive and a negative, then they cancel each other. What a waste of time. Nah
Nice wordings though cudnt hear the song but by looking at the response it seems to b perfect....:beer: Reps for ya....