Why Me?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Dec 15, 2005.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    those of you who know me know i have some people who are so dear to me that live far away...many friends...lotsa family...even my love...what tore me apart the other day is that one of my friends here who help me to cope in times i am missing those away from me...is also moving away...each one dear to me has a part of my heart...so all these parts of my heart are now in india...my heart's in india...so what's left here?...a lifeless drone...anyhow...here's a poem i wrote couple min. ago bout this....comments/suggestions pleez...(some tissue to blow my nose too...)

    I ask God...why me?
    why must it happen again?
    That I have to say goodbye to a friend?
    and now when i long to hold their loyal hands...
    i cannot ..for theyve moved to a distant land...
    they left me here alone...
    drenched in my tears...for them everflowing...
    my craving to but see them once again just growing and growing...
    though i know they're doing fine...
    when i keep envisioning them here...
    each minute reminds me i wont see them for years...
    miles have separated our bodies ...but never our hearts....
    then why god is this distance tearing my heart apart?
    Dear God I pray bring me joy...
    so that i may cease from painful crying...
    for as those memories of ours lurk in my mind...
    from within i am slowly dying....
    Revive me from this death!...give me peace of mind....
    GoD help me my joy to once again find....
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    i can get an idea of how u feel by reading ur poem.... :'(

    i really liked it...
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Divya

    i liked the poem.. :)

    **Big hug**

    someone very close to me said....friendship and love doesnt count the miles..its measured by the heart
    many would agree with me on this one..........for a change;)
    i bet your friends are lucky to have to you as their friend..

    Take care alwys..your precious to many
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I understand the feeling but it's not only you. It happens to all of us. My favourite people are all in Bombay and have been for longer than I care to remember. However, they still remain my favourite people and nothing in the world will change that. Not distance....perhaps time but even a few hours together can melt the walls that come in.

    Anyone with whom you've spent so much time together with cannot ever be parted from you for the simple reason that they have played a role in shaping you into what you are. There is a part of her in you somewhere and always will be.
  5. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    ^ Yeah. the people responsible for making you what you are really important. Theyre people who you wouldnt really forget.

    That is.......Usually. :eek::. I did. Already.
  6. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    U know wat .. Words no longer matter .. Its da feelings wid which u've written this poem .. i mean .. Its somethin which has come from deep inside U .. n I really appreciate that n I understand that :) .. Wish u all da love in life ;) .. n bubbly .. whoz dat "Someone close" ???
  7. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    thank you all for understanding and giving me emotional support...its good to know i am not alone....

    and thanks bubbly ...for the hug...

    u know...its sad really...i miss them all so much...but yu all...and my friends left here... help me to cope...
  8. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    Tch tch..... !! i feel pity for emotional freaks (sorry no offence included) but kya uppar se likha kar aaye thi.. ? jo aapko saare din acche naseeb honge?? it's a wheel, and everyone thinks he/she is the lonliest in this world..but then again look above, look on ur side, look down, loook right, look left.. !! arre idhar udhar kya dekh rahi hoon.. shaanti se live ur life na :).. *sorry don't take these comments on ur heart, but it's true .. just keep things to urself" .. or make a journal.. !!
  9. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    @knight guitar...yah ...i know being emotional can be bad...but...im not emotional always silly :)...if my poem made yu think so then i succeeded in conveying the emotion...and about keeping things to myself... or writing a journal...that is what i do...i keep a daily journal in form of writing a poem each day about each day's happenings...and my frends who read my poetry only suggested that i post the poems...so i do...and i am living a good and rewarding "shaanthi filled" life...its only normal na to have an occasional sad moment... :think: ;)
  10. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    that's.. it.. u should be like this only.. cause.. in the end.. u should live ur life to the fullest.. right.. so that.. when ur six feet deep, u will be lonely like hell.. !! so let's party six feet above.. and leave the rest for later.. after.. remember divya.. !! "u can never drive ur car by looking at ur rear view mirror" so keep moving ahead.. just look when u feel like someone gonna hit u from behind.. !! :).. cause if u keep looking at ur rear view mirror trust me.. u'll lost the way..and not that.. ur car will not be a showcase model anymore, instead of that it's gonna be more of an insurance case model.. !!
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Divy...i can feel how u wud b feeling while writing this lovely poem....cos m goin thru the same kinda of situation as my best is not in Delhi any more.
    I loved the poem... :)
    one from me too *HUG*
  12. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Awww,.... c'mon,... look at it this way,... life's more colourfull with changes!!
    Enjoy the changes instead of sobbin for "sweet pasT".

    Btw,.... poems cool too.
  13. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    True dude .. true...... the only constant thing is change..........we btter learn to except change then miss the past ........

    Nice poem though .....
  14. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    "Why Me " .... !!!

    its not only u.. there is someone else.. who feels the same.. but the way u expressed in words was gr8.. no one can do better than that...
  15. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Highly optimistic one ...... If i am compiling a text book for class 4 maybe i'll have this as the first chapter called prayer !
  16. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Hey .. ur thanking Bubbly for huggin u .. I can do dat too .. infact here .. two from me .. *HUG* *HUG* .. n a small little .... *muah* :p:
  17. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    thanx garry and notty for the love....im lovin the love... :dance:

    @nanda...yah... its like a prayer...i am pretty religious...so that element popping up in my poem is just natural:)...thanx for honoring my poem by considering its placement in a fourth standard text book... :p:
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  18. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    hey Divya,really nice poem....
    i feel its helps to be emotional,..i notice you are a cancerian....me too,and a typical one:) ...so i know that cancerians are very sensitive,..and get emotionally attached to all that give them support and that is dear to them...
    but it can be used as a strength,if used with positive attittude.... ;)

    btw ...since you are loving the love...heres luv from me too.....and also some reps...:)
    Keep writin :beer:

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