why like that......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jan 7, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi..

    thought about differnce once we put our best foot forward outside the home.....and once we return into it.....in form of poetic justification.............



    we step out of our home
    and carry the face painted with
    ruthlessnes and practicality
    the will to win
    dominating spirit
    the hard decisions


    all
    goes into behind the scene..
    dynasty of our influence gets diluted,
    colour of face turns vibrant
    the urge of superiority disintegrates
    once we are within the embrace of our beloved
    softness and emotionality
    the will to loose
    the imaginative mind
    the naughty talk.....

    how we transform ourshelves so differnt being same
    when we are confronting the world...
    and
    when we are expressing the deep feelings to beau

    does everyone
    blushes in the emotional companionship?
    or only me?

    does everyone imagine the world the way i visualize ...or only me?

    truth is not contaminated with experience...i am yet to discover...

    my finger crossed....still



    rohit
    astroguru26
     
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  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    Good! ! !
    Now tell me wat it means.................
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    :think: ...... :think: ..... :think: ..... :think: ..... :think:

    after so many of poetries on life, sadness and betrayl...
    allas..! poem describing the magic after falling in love... ;)


    :think: ..... :think: is rohit in love now? :think: ..... :think:

    now im keeping my fingers crossed too... reading that nice poem..really nice!
     
  4. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    nice poem rohit...could have been better,you could have spoken of more aspects that we face in the outside world...a lot more things change ppl....but i guess i shouldnt say this...its ur poem,and you know best what you wanna say thru it....these were only my thoughts...reps comin your way...:beer:
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    nice nice...... but i didn't exactly get the whole thing behind it...... :eek:: but i know it's a GOOD POEM! :)
     

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