hi.. thought about differnce once we put our best foot forward outside the home.....and once we return into it.....in form of poetic justification............. we step out of our home and carry the face painted with ruthlessnes and practicality the will to win dominating spirit the hard decisions all goes into behind the scene.. dynasty of our influence gets diluted, colour of face turns vibrant the urge of superiority disintegrates once we are within the embrace of our beloved softness and emotionality the will to loose the imaginative mind the naughty talk..... how we transform ourshelves so differnt being same when we are confronting the world... and when we are expressing the deep feelings to beau does everyone blushes in the emotional companionship? or only me? does everyone imagine the world the way i visualize ...or only me? truth is not contaminated with experience...i am yet to discover... my finger crossed....still rohit astroguru26
:think: ...... :think: ..... :think: ..... :think: ..... :think: after so many of poetries on life, sadness and betrayl... allas..! poem describing the magic after falling in love... :think: ..... :think: is rohit in love now? :think: ..... :think: now im keeping my fingers crossed too... reading that nice poem..really nice!
nice poem rohit...could have been better,you could have spoken of more aspects that we face in the outside world...a lot more things change ppl....but i guess i shouldnt say this...its ur poem,and you know best what you wanna say thru it....these were only my thoughts...reps comin your way...:beer:
nice nice...... but i didn't exactly get the whole thing behind it...... : but i know it's a GOOD POEM!