Why is it??....my original poem..waitin 4 comments..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rocker_vish, Sep 4, 2006.

  1. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    heah this is my first and d last poem....came from within....tell me if u like it.....


    WHY IS IT?


    Why is it? that I alwayz tell myself that i dont miss her,
    But whenever i see her,
    I realize that she is the only person i have been waitin 4!!

    Why is it? , that
    I alwaz tell myself that i dont need her,
    But whenever i see tears rolling out of her eyes,
    My Heart cries 4 her!!!

    Why is it?, that
    I get angry on her and tell myself that i'll never talk 2 her,
    But whenver i see her smilin face,
    It gives me inner pleasure and start talkin 2 her!!!

    Why is it?, that
    I alwaz tell myself that she doesnt make any difference to me,
    But still i cant sleep whole night, thinking abt her!!



    WHY IS IT?

    I looked deep inside my heeart
    I asked myself!
    Is it coz i still love her??
    and answer i got is YES.

    She is locked in a corner of my heart,
    And i have thrown the key in a deep ocean,
    So this lock could nver be opened,
    And i could lover her till the last day of my life!!!
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wow ur poem is good ...i dont knw wether i can add reps or not but dhassu work man !
     
  3. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    thanxx man!!!! i appreciate..
     
  4. urban_slacker

    urban_slacker New Member

    its cul man u wrote u heart...but i can guess what r u goin to say next...thats d draw back....
     
  5. aaki1993

    aaki1993 New Member

    cool.........
     
  6. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    true very true Urban....... its was kinda....Painful....i hope ya understand...
     
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I didnt really read through this 1 as such, but isnt this the same as what u posted recently? :/
     
  8. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    ya re...never knew..i posted it b4....lolzz....was long time back......shae how do i delete..the thread...
     
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nah, it's ok, no need to delete it :) (and you can't anyway :p )

    There used to be a forum leader here who could close the thread. Oh well.
     
  10. .....hmmm again ....;)

    dude ur poem was good, one reading and culd make out the whole painting ...nice job
     
  11. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    thanx monica
     
  12. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    good effort man! :)
     
  13. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    thanx mate
     
  14. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    hey..man..!!..dat was..grr8..!!!!!!!... ....

    made..me recollect a lot of dayz... :( ...
     
  15. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    @anshammer

    first of thanx..... and secndly soorrry man!!if i hurt ya!
     
  16. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    arey...naii re......dnt b sorriee... its k ....
    jus wonderin...dat... u hv gone thru all these.. or writin aise hi apne se??...
     
  17. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    ah...had a real bad time.....this one came straight from ma heart! wrote it without even a single scribble....its not cuz i got good imagination its cuz what i wrote i had been through it......
    and now when i try to write something aise he......not easy.....too many pieces.......2 put together... ihope u understand bro...wel soon ill b writin somethin...just busy with studies... newyz take care and have fun! [:D]
     
  18. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good attempt !
     

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