the eyes and unspoken truth of his enthralled me everytime in his arms, his husky tone with which he used to call me... the softness with which he carries his emotions... waiting for his arms to soothe the soul and giving rest to the search of happiness.... the sparkle in his eyes and passionate hug that i never resisted.... with each day my emotions grew stronger and wait was frustrating..... he never returned back..... my love succumbed to another human soul who ruled my senses with the faith ....... he left me too..... emotionally and physically shattered searching the shoulder to cry on, seeing everytime the world that i wish for me going down with the passion a hollowness engulfs me and guiltyness in the name of love pinches my soul... making me feel as whore..... rohit
@ rohit.. ur poem is indeed a different one.. Outflowing with the emtions of a girl but I would like to know why did you name it as Whore..??
thanks for reading..... there are instances in life in relationship phase when a couple part diffent way after sharing the whole life....the differnce in male and females attitude towards sharing the passionate times is indeed a eye-opener male will feel it as the time of pleasure but for the female it will be the harsh truth to carry on with the life.......feeling of guiltness ruining the happiness of physical closeness.... the protagonist carried the same emotions .....deceived in love by those who satisfied their physical need ... it was her love for them that made her to share the private space...but they walked way leaving her.......as whore anyways.......it is my view not necessary the opinion of all.. thanks once again .... rohit
@ rohit.. I am really impressed by your deep thoughts in writing this poem..!! I hope you keep writing beautifully..
sense some spam here.. as the issue is bit controvertial.. so b4 it happens, just highlighting the main point. btw @rohit.. poor english.. good concept..(though i dont agree){dont ask 'why' as d answer is already highlighted above} nice flow.. ok-ok expression.. over all.. thik-thak..
@ rohit... ITS AN AWESOME POEM! its just amazing... reading it actually made ma felt wat the riter in the poem was feeling... NICELY DONE! i don;t think it could have been done better! amazing... REPS! KEEP RITING MAN!!!!!!!!! logged on to igt after sometime... and it actually made me smile to read such an awesome poem after a longgggggg time!
hey dude...iam kinda dissapointed with ur description of ur poem as at first i thought it had deeper meaning. After reading ur poem i dint go on literal interpretation as u mentioned but i took the poet as a person who thinks he is become a "whore" since he is being used and then ditched by wrethchedness and misery of this world. He feels disgusted coz of his failures and yet gives in every time he comes across any trouble. But nevertheless a thought provoking composition.