whore....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jul 21, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    the eyes and unspoken truth
    of his enthralled me everytime in his arms,
    his husky tone with which he used to call me...
    the softness with which he carries his emotions...


    waiting for his arms to soothe the soul
    and giving rest to the search of happiness....
    the sparkle in his eyes
    and passionate hug that i never resisted....

    with each day my emotions grew stronger
    and wait was frustrating.....
    he never returned back.....


    my love succumbed to another human soul
    who ruled my senses with the faith .......

    he left me too.....

    emotionally and physically shattered searching the shoulder to cry on,
    seeing everytime the world that i wish for me going down with the passion
    a hollowness engulfs me and guiltyness in the name of love
    pinches my soul...
    making me feel as whore.....



    rohit
     
  2. Seher

    Seher New Member

    @ rohit.. ur poem is indeed a different one.. Outflowing with the emtions of a girl but I would like to know why did you name it as Whore..??
     
  3. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    thanks for reading.....
    there are instances in life in relationship phase when a couple part diffent way after sharing the whole life....the differnce in male and females attitude towards sharing the passionate times is indeed a eye-opener
    male will feel it as the time of pleasure but for the female it will be the harsh truth to carry on with the life.......feeling of guiltness ruining the happiness of physical closeness....

    the protagonist carried the same emotions .....deceived in love by those who satisfied their physical need ...

    it was her love for them that made her to share the private space...but they walked way leaving her.......as whore


    anyways.......it is my view not necessary the opinion of all..

    thanks once again ....


    rohit
     
  4. Seher

    Seher New Member

    @ rohit.. I am really impressed by your deep thoughts in writing this poem..!!
    I hope you keep writing beautifully..
     
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    sense some spam here.. as the issue is bit controvertial..
    so b4 it happens, just highlighting the main point.


    btw @rohit..

    poor english..
    good concept..(though i dont agree){dont ask 'why' as d answer is already highlighted above}
    nice flow..
    ok-ok expression..

    over all.. thik-thak..
     
  6. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    boss is always right......thanks for encouragement
     
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  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ rohit... ITS AN AWESOME POEM! its just amazing... reading it actually made ma felt wat the riter in the poem was feeling... NICELY DONE! i don;t think it could have been done better! amazing... REPS! :cool: KEEP RITING MAN!!!!!!!!!




    logged on to igt after sometime... and it actually made me smile to read such an awesome poem after a longgggggg time! :D
     
  8. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member



    thanks hira....
     
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hey dude...iam kinda dissapointed with ur description of ur poem as at first i thought it had deeper meaning.

    After reading ur poem i dint go on literal interpretation as u mentioned but i took the poet as a person who thinks he is become a "whore" since he is being used and then ditched by wrethchedness and misery of this world.
    He feels disgusted coz of his failures and yet gives in every time he comes across any trouble.

    But nevertheless a thought provoking composition.
     

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