who is responsible?read and answer the poll...have your say....

hey guys!!
this is my third poem, read it and answer the poll...have your say...i had this poem in my mind for quite some time.....decided to put it on paper today....my best creation so far, i think....

Title-who is responsible???
by-Ujwal Batra(uj_6string)

The verdict is in,
he is doomed to die,
sin he commited,
you see him cry.

you see him cry,
but it aint guilt that makes him weep,
for his conscience is free,
the wants to deny, the truth deep.

"i am innocent"he affirms,
"i did no sin"
"i did no wrong",
"then why am i in?"

"my concequences were such,
they made me do wrong,
white and black, the difference i was never told"
so, i should be set free,
he makes the statement bold"

"to do the wrong,
was the right,"i was told.
the truth was hidden.
my life was pale cold"

"my innocence stolen,
the day i was born"
"my conscience messed up,
my soul was torn."

"i shall speak no more"
"the rest lies with you"
mercy-nah, i ask not,
but justice i do"

you see him cry,
but it aint guilt that makes him weep,
for his conscience is free,
he deny's the truth deep...
he is just afraid of death,
simply afraid of death......

who was responsible,
he(god) alone knows the truth....
whatz ur say?
who is responsible,
the man or his concequences?
where dose the truth lie???
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now, answer the poll.....and rate the poem:grin:

 

yaar guys, been an hour, noone is replying:shock::cry2:
plz reply!

 

kaha say copy paste kiya woh bata i ll vote :shock:

 

^^^^my friend, itz a uj orignal:shock:, i swear...i swear to god....i wrote it

 

oh okay please dont cry.... gimme a sec ...I'll think on it and vote ...ok but plz dont cry plz big smile c'mon c'mon


hmm okay I thot about it and to me the answer lies somewhere in between... let me think it out loud okay?

so okay the man did not choose what destiny threw at him but he always had a choice in how he reacted to what was thrown at him....okay....I made up my mind...I go with the man okay please be happy now...smiley face please

-arpi

 

finally a reply!!!!
:grin:thank you...you are too sweet!:beer:
hmm.....ur quite right, he could not choose what destiny threw at him, but he always had a choice to react to it the way he wanted.....
but then again, he knew not what was right and what was wrong...so he did not know how to react to his destiny.....
but when i really think about it, i think the man was responsible, for i firmly believe that man has the choice of chossing his destiny.....he has the power to go against the odds....
letz wait for more replies.....

 

his consequences.. he cud not chose ..

its not about poem only... but isnt it truth while living in this world??

 

^^^^@NIMISHA-thankz a lot for replying
well, weve got a divided opinion, 50%say the consequences, the other 50% think the man is responsible.....well...letz wait for more replies....
and btw guys.....there has been a mistake....
in the poll options, by mistake ive written he could not choose him....that should be, he could not choose them...sorry..:sorry:

 

thats my poem

 

@UJsen - ROFLMBFSSAO
dunno about orignlty of poem - hey uj what's ur age?
i think its gotta be the man - dont he got brains?

 

Me thats
ujSEN is 13
uj_6STRING is fourteen


thats still my poem.

 

OH NO NO NO!!!!
ITZ MY DAMN POEM....TAKING THE ADVANTAGE OF BEING ANOTHER UJ EH??
@fat_kax....i am 14, the poem is orignal, and yeah, i have some brains:banana:

 

hmm....
57%say the man is responsible
42%blame the concequences.....
letz wait for more replies......:banana:
and people...uhem....rep me:grin:

 

^^^^If I rep u ,will u rep me???grin:

 

^^^^rep me first, then i shall think....:grin:

 

^Both of you wanna stick to the topic of the thread?

 

ujsen's repping wont matter...@uj6_string ... btw bakc to topic...its his consequences.

 

hmm yea I know I am sweet :grin: tell me something new hee hee glad to see u smiling... but seriously tho have we reached a verdict yet? lagta hai sab batte huwe hain.....half think man half think consequences hmmm'...is the voting supposed to go one forever...how do we decide the end verdict...what is the prupose of this? am i asking too many questions?think I'll stop now

-arpi

 

maine kahin suna tha.....insaan bure nahi hote haalaat unhe bura bana dete hain...Hum-Tum movie me tha ye dialogue :
i believe no man is worth hating...theres is a reason behind whatevr we are today...that onli we can understand...others can laf & just pity at it...
ther is a saying....evrythng is funny until its happenning to some1 else....

i wud support the man....
good poem....

 

The man is responsible for the consequences..
it cant be turned the other way round!
if it hadnt been for his decisions he wouldnt have landed into a mess
and like some people do..
he's unneccesarily putting the blame on his consequences..washing his hands off his own sins in other words
Besides ..tomorrow also happens to be a part of a persons life
what he/she does has a major impact on the future..
theres no use regretting and repenting on things that have past..
the tears and penance wont matter much later..
what ever will be ..will be..
and there is payback time for everyone..

reminds me of an sms something like
"when one door closes another opens..but sometimes we look at the closed door..expecting it to open...that we dont see another open.."
there are answers to all questions..
its jus a matter of reading the signs and deciphering them..
God shouldnt be always used as a mode to recluse...

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Fantabulous food for thought Ujwal!!
hope u write more of similar quality stuff

All the best!