Where Were You...?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Nov 1, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Hope that you will all forgive me for my long absence...! Did someone miss me...? :eek::

    Where were you...
    when all of a sudden
    my certainty of being loved
    had collapsed …

    Where were you...
    when in the silent darkness
    howls of pain
    were tearing my heart…

    Where were you...
    when I could not make it
    and Time, unfair,
    was flowing so slowly…

    Where were you...
    when I tried not to think of you
    and the first thought
    that accompanied the rising sun
    was for you…

    Where were you...?
    Simply…you were not anywhere
    because I was not anything
    anymore for you

    Now you ask for my forgiveness
    and I have already forgiven you…
    because a love that rises again
    from a great pain
    has the right to another possibility…

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  2. "
    Where were you...
    when I could not make it
    and Time, unfair,
    was flowing so slowly…
    "

    great u rule.....
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Welcome back buddy :):)

    & cheers :beer: for this poem.....i cud see a positive ending to a sad poem...
     
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    as always... greaatttt..!
    reps for sure.
     
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Wow...thats really good...repped you already.
     
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    wooooo...look whose back!! man..i honestly missed reading ur work..i thot u wont be returning, but guess now ur back4good

    oh..sorry for my yap-yap!! :p:
    nice poem wid a "nicer" ending

    reps
     
  7. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks to all of you for the nice welcome...! I'll soon be back to reply, ok...?

    Amanush

    :)
     

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