Where Death Dwells Something tells me that today would be a different day for me as i make way to a building dewlling amongst darkness and stormy clouds Living Cadavers mocking past me and i feel as if they stare at me asking why Every minute a bin full of cotton wads dripping blood catch my eye People buying tickets to Heaven to get rid of their living hell And for some the time has already arrived to depart as tolls a bell I still am walking through those dirty corridors trying not to feel numb but the noise of neverending screams sends me to a state of delirium Finally i get out of this place and sigh a breath of relief and all i got infected with are few sleepless nights contracted from those living cadavers i met For the rest of my life. i'll wish that none of my near one gets to go there Because its a place where spring of blood flows and death dances bare ps- If u havent got the "place" in question..then let me tell u, u can take that as a Hospital..precisely speaking i went to a Cancer Hospital!..and it was such a trauma to be there, so have tried to put my ordeal down to words!..
One of your best if not the best didi. Moving imagery and just really really good. Kudos and for the first time reps :beer:
thot i made it a lil dumb by intensive rhyming at so many places....but then..im letting it be, coz if i change a couple o words..then it would kill my poem @distu thanx for reading chotu... :grin:
Dark & impressive…. The last two lines shows the basic mentality of every human being….that no matter what they go through but they always wish that their near ones are far far away from those painful thoughts…. Reps reps reps ……..:grin:
@martina ummm.. "more often"?? :think: ...i cant help yaar..i write..when im bitten by poetry kida :Tongue2: rather..when im going thru such times when it becomes a necessity for me to put my thots down to words...anyways thanx4 reading sweety!!
