Where Are We There was a season when we held the conviction that we're inseparable, but look where are we now We used to sit doing nothing till the dusk would come calling, but look where are we now The confabulations were undying as TIME was utterly pleased with us, but look where are we now We meet after a bit too many days to count With barest of clue when would be next time round There'd be no tomorrow and soon, all vows would be drowned The attic full of reminiscences would always be treasured as it has echoes of our laughs, cries and murmurs But the reality will stab me with its carving knife when i'll come to think of where are we now
soo may views but no comments ..strange ! ...vini .......... i ....cant say any thing...wat is this all about ...@#$@#?
no replies coz people couldnt understand the poem just like u. maybe one needs to be a poet himself/herself to understand my poems? :think: haha..but its not greek anyway, is it? chalo..koi baat nahi! i know der r some people here who can get my poem very well! so never mind!
AWESOME.....i understood it completely...i mean if i am thnking the same way...: it mite b thru a different angle but this was a Masterpiece in itself... u shud strt writing oftn...dont b seasonal : & yeah...needless to say....reps added :beer:
@garry chal kisi ko to samajh rather pasand aayi about writing often>>well it all depends on when my poetic spells get trigerred..i mean i cant be regular, it eej naat in my hands..it eeej in hands of poem ka kida.. :Tongue2: thanks for reading n liking my work sweety! ps-yes its "felt" :cry1: but dont ask how/why/what! hmm..
vini ... u bet dis is not Greek : ... dis is pure, rich English ... amazing stock of words u hav :insane: ... gr8 work :rock: ... keep it up !!! & did u jus say dat 1 needz 2 b a poet himself 2 undrstnd ur poems :think: ... well, thank you ... i undrstud what u were tryin 2 say :Lighten: ... atleast i think i did
^^ hey thanx a lot for reading! did u really get what i was trying to say? okay do i take english tutions??..whatever made u say that.. :think: its such a simple angrezi..i think my hindi is good rather
then take my hindi tuitions ... i need it more badly :cry2: ... half of the time i speak in the faminine gender :alien1: !!!
Intriguing title...great poem...I'm glad I read previously posted poems.. "We meet after a bit too many days to count With barest of clue when would be next time round There'd be no tomorrow and soon, all vows would be drowned" Nice stuff...
