When the one you love dies..

The Final Scene: The person that you love is dying between your arms after a long abandonment..

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There is one life moment
When life has no movement

When your love is dying
And time can't stop flying

When it's last looks for eyes
And souls embrace for final byes

When you see in the eyes a question
And the answer you can't mention

Why have you turned your back?!
Why haven't you come back?!

A moment, when you accept the dos and don'ts
The right things or wrong your love wants

When arrogance's barriers are diminished
And ego's frontiers are demolished

But it is the last only moment
When you cant promise or lament

When regret has no meaning
And tears can't describe a feeling

When life won't have a new beginning
Because the start has begun from the last ending

By Me

 

Very Touching, Reem...

That revived some of my precious memories...

Keep it up!

REgards,
Zooom...!!

 

Very nice, indeed!

 

Excellent poem reem, keep 'em coming.

 

great work...

 

was really gud work reem, really.

 

that was really good reem, soooooooo sad :'(

 

very cool

 

Nice work, reem...

 

“ Don’t goooo”

What r the desperate words you will say?

 

Good one Reems ,. probably if the person hears that you will still love him , it would surely be more easy from him,...

 

Guys it is only an imaginary writing..

 

But its still very good. Great work!!

 

u have scary imagination then

 

it sends an advice to lovers to express their feelings before it is too late..

 

ummm , its surely a nice advise , it does not work everytime,.. the worst part of supressing it is the fear of getting dejected !!

 

it works only with the right person..

 

and the right person is in one of a million ................

btw nice writing ... its preti touchy ...

 

wot?...i m not crying... : ....that just touched my heart...so beautiful and so pure, yet, a bit sad...i swear i m not crying

 

sure it works with the right person , a human mind is very funny and can easily get decieved by anyone considered as a right person probably ,..