When the one you love dies..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Reem, Nov 27, 2004.

  1. Reem

    Reem Banned

    The Final Scene: The person that you love is dying between your arms after a long abandonment..


    There is one life moment
    When life has no movement

    When your love is dying
    And time can't stop flying

    When it's last looks for eyes
    And souls embrace for final byes

    When you see in the eyes a question
    And the answer you can't mention

    Why have you turned your back?!
    Why haven't you come back?!

    A moment, when you accept the dos and don'ts
    The right things or wrong your love wants

    When arrogance's barriers are diminished
    And ego's frontiers are demolished

    But it is the last only moment
    When you cant promise or lament

    When regret has no meaning
    And tears can't describe a feeling

    When life won't have a new beginning
    Because the start has begun from the last ending

    By Me
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Very Touching, Reem...

    That revived some of my precious memories...

    Keep it up!

  3. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Very nice, indeed!
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Excellent poem reem, keep 'em coming.
  5. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    great work...
  6. 6String_assasin

    6String_assasin The Painkiller

    was really gud work reem, really.
  7. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    that was really good reem, soooooooo sad :'(
  8. Venus

    Venus New Member

    very cool:)
  9. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice work, reem...
  10. Reem

    Reem Banned

    “ Don’t goooo”

    What r the desperate words you will say?
  11. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    Good one Reems ,. probably if the person hears that you will still love him , it would surely be more easy from him,...
  12. Reem

    Reem Banned

    Guys it is only an imaginary writing.. ;)
  13. tejas

    tejas ..........

    But its still very good. Great work!!
  14. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    u have scary imagination then ;)
  15. Reem

    Reem Banned

    it sends an advice to lovers to express their feelings before it is too late.. :)
  16. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    ummm , its surely a nice advise , it does not work everytime,.. the worst part of supressing it is the fear of getting dejected !!
  17. Reem

    Reem Banned

    it works only with the right person..
  18. skaw

    skaw snooze

    and the right person is in one of a million ................

    btw nice writing ... its preti touchy ...
  19. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    wot?...i m not crying... :eek:: ....that just touched my heart...so beautiful and so pure, yet, a bit sad...i swear i m not crying
  20. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    sure it works with the right person , a human mind is very funny and can easily get decieved by anyone considered as a right person probably ,..

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