when i die...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, May 18, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    when i die
    do remember me
    i'll see u from d sky
    do look towards me...
    when i die
    dont weep for me
    i wasnt good
    plz do forgive me...
    when i die
    never feel lonely
    because der always wud b two hands of ur god
    that wud hold u firmly...
    when i die
    do not look fr me
    coz' u wont find me
    anywhere in this world....
    when i die
    dont remember me
    as d one who made u laugh
    but d one who did not let u cry...
    when i die
    dont remember me just as a mortal
    if u want to remember me
    remember me as an immortal felling...
    when i die
    dont remember me as knowledge
    remember me as d thirst for wisdom...
    when i die
    never look behind
    coz' u hav to go ahead
    nd never say die....


    comments awaited!!!
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    wat has happened to all poets of IGT??? u guys are giving too much to digest...
    another good one.. whoa !!
     
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    to be honest nandy, you have written much better earlier.

    I dnt know if this piece has some emotional attachment, else it looks little forced.
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    'tis good for thoughts....
    but not your best i'll say though....
    keep posting!
    \m/
     
  5. this is another kiddo attempt ... hahaa
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u so much dear.... :)
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u ... :)
     
  8. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    at least its an attempt..thnx nyway..
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ya it does hav very much emotns attatched to it..nyway thnx...
     

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