i dust the house i chase that mouse i set things right to make it look nice i spread out books so you might think me wise i try and take all the virtues..done with all vice i do it all with a smile..just for that twinkle in your eyes.. i wash the dishes i fold the clothes i give up my wishes i fight my hopes i hide rough truths..i speak sugar coated lies i do it all with a smile just for that twinkle in your eyes.. everyday i go through the ordeal not once making it a big deal you don't care about what i did.. only about what i did not i feel like screaming for i am so agitated but all i can do is cry myself to sleep..gosh im so frustrated you snap at me all through the day, all the time yes i am now grown but so what if i still love to calculate time with that wind chime it hurts when you call me useless i open my mouth but i am helpless it hurts when you chide me for anything and everything i cry all night..i wish to fly..oh so high..gimme some air..gimme some wings i want to go far away far from everybody.. want to be with nobody for i feel sad and i get mad when i think ..that whatever i do .. is never ever going to be enough for you ..
i like how you alternate the subject... i.. then you... then i again i like poems which end on a strong note one question though why are all your poems dark?
haha umm...coz i write only when i am sad.. i tried writing when i am in a jolly mood..but i guess at that time..i am too happy to type .. i mostly write sad, romantic or rebellious poetry.. but you never know maybe someday i'd write breaking the boundaries of genres..and show you a happy poem
nah..that's a song by linkin park.."leave out all the rest" make it into a song..i'd love to hear it with a diffrent tune..
i was only asking cause even though a band has a genre a lyricist needs to be versatile... two poems in fifteen mins? you must be awfully depressed :tongue2: i'm guessing you write them and save them then post them together? but that would be plagiarism if its already a song!!!
nah i wrote em yesterday..i don't take too long to write so.. and ther's no strategy..as such..you know..saving and then posting and stuff..
I recently promised myself I wont write (no matter how bright the lines might seem) until I'm sure its not an outburst of anger/sadness/negative emotions. They seem to grow on you, in some time you start liking it, and don't realise until you're deep inside. Problem is you don't even accept the fact. But, nice lines.
aarrree..!! then what do i write about? i mean..if not about an outburst of my emotions ? nyways..thank you
Why don't you simply ask the person what he/she wants? If there is a mismatch - walk away. If there isn't and you don't have any issues - then do only that.
you might write about what you like rather than what you dislike. It'll make you truly appreciate the power of poetry and the effect it has on you. Also its very difficult to write happy words. That'll make it even more special.