I'm new to this whole forum posting lyrics and feedback thing. but heres a poem/lyrics/i dont know that i wrote yesterday when i couldnt get the damn thoughts out of my head so here it is I don't know what to do when all I've ever known was you it all seemed like such a fun game until you left me to deal with the shame the blame the pain you only looked out for your own selfish needs never cared for the ones you let bleed like a coward you just ran away you'd think you're the victim with the way you behaved like a child in denial you're always on trial never at fault for once in your life could you be an adult? you never took the time to look thought you could read everyone like a book acting like a master at hand you're just a puppet being led cross the sand and it really hurts me to see you're not the man i thought you to be you're just a scared little boy sulking when you cant have your toys but i hope one day you'll see yourself with open eyes and stop living in your silly lies find out who you really are stop wasting your potential when you've come so far and maybe thats all i ever saw in you was the potential you never saw through instead you waste it on the feeling of hate hate for yourself hate for your life hate for the people who've only tried to fight fight for you you just give up its nothing new treating life like a batlefield thats all we're here for using offense as your defense will only get you so far in war until you take the time to know yourself you'll always be scared of the world around you keep walking down the path your on and it will be to late when someone finds you
i liked it !!! you really are very close to this person ...how simply have you detailed the personality of the guy in words ...i thought you would end it like " i wish you keep drowning in your meaning less indulgence and die in some corner" ...but u still seem to care !!
its good... and the ideas are flowing awesomely! it looks like the style is inspired from linkin park..
