what is your present state of mind

@brknhrt

nice lines

and :welcomean

 

thanx angle !
wel ur lines suggest sum serious thoughts as wel...
tis is certainly a nice way to express one self..

nyways to post more, wil do d same as n whn possible !

Brknhrt

 

lo aa gaye hum ek baar fir is aashiyane main,
Kabhi maikhana, kabhi kaidkhana - Majboor hain yahaan aane main,
takdeer se aaj ke din bas tanhayee ka saath hain,
ek usi ko dhoonte hain, jis ke bina din bhi andheri raat hain !

tried one in hindi !-!
le me knw if effective !
Brknhrt.

 

If the bleak road of life is covered with soot,

And the weight is too heavy to bear,

Just keep up the bubble of hope in your heart

And keep telling yourself "I'll get there."

Because if you lift up your face to the sky,

To shout your defiance of wrong,

The sweet rain of life will fall onto the ground,

The trail won't be this cold for long.

If everything beautiful's dying around you,

Death may be tempting your heart.

If you take the easy way over the right,

Your world will burn in the dark.

Don't stray from the path of the golden sun,

This road is the only way.

If you're faithful to life, as the Earth itself turns,

The dim night will transform into day.

 

comment guys

 

this poem is from my good friend tabby one optimistic person who has got heart of gold

 

hey Madhur ..

Tis was real Madhur like ur id, lolz :-D.
but truely vry vry optimistic n wld b of real help if one's battelina lng battle lone..

nice work..
keep on goin great guns..
Tk Cr.
Brknhrt.

 

thanks broken heart
ur id reminds me of famous advertisment of the adhesive quick fix
" it can fix anything except broken heart"
thanks well the last poem was not from me but my friend Tabby
and i wish her good luck as she is expecting a baby

 

Baithe tere khayalon mein kore kagaz pe likh dala tera naam
tasveer bhi utaar dali aur likha yeh pegaam
"ZINDA YA MURDA PAKADNE WAALE KO RS.500 KA INAAM"

 

pls dont tell me this is your original creation

 

No its not.. but i seriously liked it ...

 

Al d luk to TABBY..........
May she b blessed wid an lil angel who brings her loads of luv n luk n success n...........al d goodness in d world..............

yep i knw tis is a true fact nothin but time can heal a heart tats left brkn. :-D
nyways but d goodness of frns does makes d recovery faster........

nyways tk cr.
Brknhrt.
P.S Hey knight ki gf -------! Tumhara singnature kaafi kewl hai.........keep it up

 

@brkn heart thanks for wishes
@knight yeah i knew it was not urs

 

Khushiyo ke raaste gum ke khazane mile
Is zameen pe na jaane kitne aashiyane mile
ik gum ke badle koi khushi na deta yaha
har kabra pe na jalata koi diya yaha

 

wow. great thought and here is my attempt.
wonder if i can compete with u all.


DARD
dard kuch anhoni, ghayal ye dil
pyar ke liye pyasa, mar gaya bhichara
samaj me na aaye, dil ki ye baatein
pagal ban gaya, is jhag se chal pada
kahan jhayega ab ye dil,
kahan basi hain iski manzil.

please do comment

 

Toot Jaate Hain Sabhi Rishte Magar
Dil Se Dil Ka Raabta Apni Jagah
Dil Ko Hai Tujh Se Na Milne Ka Yaqeen
Tujh Se Milne Ki Dua Apni Jagah

 

the world of love
unknown to you
seasons really strange
reasons out of range
you said,"i dont like you"

still to complete this work of mine...
waiting for precious comments
from your hearts that bright they shine
much costlier than present gold ornaments. ( hehe jus to ryme)

 

Na neend ki god main hum so paye
Na chain se bhi hum ro paye
Kuch kehta raha dil unse har bhar
Hume bedardi ka ilzaam dekar
woh nadaan use sun na paye