What if I am Gay ?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, Aug 30, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist


    Note: - I am not Gay..

    Thot 2 write sumthing after a long time.. on a topic dat's really challenging.. all comments/compliments r most welcum...

    Today its raining like hell..
    and I am missing him as well..
    miss the way he used to like me
    miss the way he used to care for me..

    Can't tell this to anyone
    they think I am insane..
    What's my mistake if I love him
    What's his mistake that he is loved by me

    I know this society will never accept us
    why shall we care for them who make a fuss
    What if I am gay..
    There is nothing for them to say..

    Yes, god made me like this..
    It's not my fault neither his..
    I just hope he feels my vein..
    Comes to me and hugs me again..

    Lets be together and show this society..
    this is true love not just a serendipity..
    Who are they to call us Gay..
    and whats the big deal..
    If I am a GAy......

  2. elfascinating

    elfascinating risqué

    If someone says "I am not dumb" it totally negates it and actually means he IS. SAYING negates it.

    Same is the case with "I am not gay".
  3. #iR@


    hmmmm.... one topic that is surely something different! but i guess the poem was simple... got me thinking yet again!
  4. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    You know, it vaguely reminded me of "All the things she said" by TATU...hence it kinda took away the fun..BUT that does not mean that this one isn't good...I liked it..good work man..keep posting!!
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    So bish, is this a contemplation of a hypothetical situation or merely testing the waters of public opinion before surfacing?
  6. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Ah, but I am gay.

    And I think this is not exactly how I feel.
  7. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    sorry dude.. i m not gay.. so i guess was not able to feel the pulse..
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this was sick ...socialize (even in ur writings)
  9. gautam_bapuli

    gautam_bapuli New Member

    good poem yaar
  10. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    hmm......dat was good....
  11. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Kiddo, whats sick here?

    I guess your brain is sick, if nothign else.
  12. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    thanx buddies.. but no one repped me :(
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    (Kiddo), whats sick here?

    I guess your (brain is sick), if nothign else

  14. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Did you use the quote feature?
    If so, then something wrong happened.
  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Lol, this reminds me of astroguru. Seems like you guys pick topics that you hope would catch people's attention and that they'd simply applaud you for picking such a topic, but the actual poem mostly sucks. Same goes for this.
  16. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    honey, this topic was not picked to catch ppl's attention.. when u give a comment like.. it suxx.. ppl expect u to justify that also if possible with some reasons or some lines that make dis peom suck.. its always easy to comment than to implement.. i will luv to read a poem written by u on this topic..
  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Sorry for being so harsh earlier. It's just that, I don't feel you've done justice to the subject. You haven't properly imagined what it'd be like to be gay.

    The moment you say "what's my mistake" or "It's not my fault", you're saying that there's something wrong with it and you're not to blame. Why should it be labelled as a fault or a mistake in the 1st place? You're just writing as a straight person feeling sorry for gay people. I don't think I'd need pity if I were gay.

    You should've concentrated more on writing about what one has to go through when you're not accepted as you are.
  18. elfascinating

    elfascinating risqué

    Gays suck.

    (Pun intended)
  19. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    THIS WHOLE THREADS SO F***ING HILARIOUS! !! :RollLol::RollLol::RollLol:

    as for the poem, i feel it would have been better if u wrote it as a person being proud of his orientation, u've written it like a depressd adolscnt who hates every part of himself nd wants to die or something, nd yea this reminds me of astroguru too :D
  20. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    LMAO :RollLol::RollLol:

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