what are u....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by benchwarmer, May 19, 2010.

  1. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    wats ur say,
    when u let go...
    wats ur dream
    when u r numb...
    need u to say sumthng i donno...
    but i knew u r gonna pass the buck,

    wats ur way
    wen u being low...
    wats ur image,
    wen u r not u....
    wanted u to show the audacity against rage...
    but u replied back wat the f**k!!!


    plz show sum love or hate... :)
     
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    nice one...
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    wht does it mean btw?
     
  4. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    here i am questioning the "let it be" attitude where i really needed somebody to act upon something... :)
     
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahhh...now i can place it.. nice
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    ordinary !!
     
  7. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    thank u...and i know... :) ...i cant write better than that may be...but i wont stop writing...
     
  8. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    and please keep telling ordinary or s**tty...i gonna need it...
     
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    I dint mean that your skills are ordinary, I meant that this piece was ordinary
     

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