Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Jun 30, 2009.

  1. a simple thought...some relations r symbiotic they need no returns they are just their by both for both...!

    two tree's mile's apart
    right from the start
    one windy evening exchanged some smell some leaves

    two waves of time
    vibrations of heart's
    went ahead to see what receed

    two friends and afternoon-tea
    rhymed with art
    always awaiting each-other its their greed

    two lives indipendent
    long road one cart
    nothing surpasts nothing suceeds
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    hii i dont know how much my review will satisfy u as i m a newbie but to me its really new and really very gud and i the ending was also kool
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its good.....man so much stuff to read since I was last online...~!~
  4. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

  5. thanks people

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