We-men

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by wylder, Feb 13, 2012.

  1. wylder

    wylder New Member

    Here's one I wrote today. This one's meant to be a little lighter, maybe a bit of ZZ Top kinda feel...


    She looked like once-in-a-lifetime girl
    One you'd adorn with diamonds and pearls
    Turned out to be a b****, not worth a dime
    Wasted my money, effort and time

    She's of the kind who'd turn up her nose
    Done all you can to get the prettiest rose
    You wanna always play hard to chase?
    Well now you have it in your face

    -- Them women - put them in their spot
    -- Them women who think "oh look, I'm so hot"
    -- Them women - tell them it’s time
    -- Oh woman, you better fall in line

    Leaves you stranded when you don't have a clue
    And all the pain that you must go through
    Every mistake she says "I hope your fine
    I'll just take yours and keep what is mine"

    -- Them women – you’ve had your field day
    -- Them women, now it’s their turn to pay
    -- Them women - tell them it’s time
    -- Oh woman, you better fall in line

    She sure should be on Broadway
    All the excuses and drama she plays
    Putting up with you is a pain in the neck
    You’re going down, I don’t a f***

    -- Them women - show them what’s right
    -- Them women their joy ride ends tonight
    -- Them women - tell them it’s time
    -- Oh woman, you better fall in line

    I put up with your lies
    You always play the knave
    Don't take my being nice
    To make me your slave
     
  2. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    LOL.
    Good lines
     
  3. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    This one is amazing!!!! :)
     
  4. guitarplayer729

    guitarplayer729 New Member

    great man
    loved it
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ha ha..
    that..wasn't poetry..was it? :p proper OUTBURST OF EMOTIONS i guess.. :)
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^whatever, I liked it!
    I guess all men will.
     
  7. wylder

    wylder New Member

    Thanks everybody... Those were just lines that came to my mind spontaneously, no serious ill-will towards women...
     

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