Tell me why when i look at you i am ready do die and at the same time i wanna survive Tell me why you are so kind when i scream you don't mind Tell me why your eyes full of dreams but still you are shy And Tell me why okay guyz...let's play this game...i started the poem...now we all need to fix it up...make it longer....add some words...and decorate it like a new bride...okay....so let's play.....ur time starts now....
wow...no1 want's to fix this stupid poem....c'mon guyz, some1....i was thinking of giving this to my gf....
reallyyy sweet poem aziz..... ....... me;s sure ur gf would like just the way it is....... ,,,,,, do tell us how it went once u do give it to her......
but it's not done...i don't think it's done...look at the first stanza..five line...look at the others four...not right...help..here... @at amit....lol
