hi.. posting the new poetry...titled as..WALKING THROUGH Down and desperate for just one success... i looked to my friends.. they rejected my appeal waited for relatives.. blamed for all what happned hoped from closed ones.. cursed for commitment i yelled..i cried...for my uselessness survived on one meals a day.... went through that never imagined.. faced the infidelity by whom i trust more than anything.. sucked by situations..and then this... nail in the coffin threw all what was precious to me... asked almighty.....now? thinking now sitting pretty ... in realistic value.. practical terms... all situations are made for me to make bitter or better god decided those....or it was my predestined fact smiling on.... but the toughest hour put the shadow on me.... on my attitude... i fear the cheerfulness.... as future is uncertain...... walking on with each breath and trying to live each moment... rohit astroguru26
Rohit no words left to say..its simply awesome :rock: and as usual just very sensitive specially the lines above..pinchs the soul thru..
i see u tried to get into another person's psyche... (it's jst a guess though) it's a good effort, definitely!