Walk alone

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Jan 30, 2006.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Iam Gonna wait for u,
    nomatter how long it is;
    nomatter how much it hurts,
    or how wrong it is.

    I know u dont luv me,
    and nor would u try;
    Iam gonna walk alone,
    nomatter for how long it is;

    you r in my every song,
    you r in my every dream;
    nomatter how much it hurts,
    and how much u make me scream;

    Iam gonna wait for u,
    till the end of my life;
    till my body goes numb,
    and all my tears dry;

    Oh, Oh my love,
    plz come back to me;
    now I even cant breath,
    and nor can i see;

    Plzz gimme a chance,
    for me, a reason to live;
    all these years in hope,
    and thats all I could give;

    I know, that you know,
    that its a long way to go;

    but Iam gonna walk alone,
    nomatter how long it is;
    nomatter how much it hurts,
    or how wriong it is.

    (for the only one I ever loved)
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Still waiting for my first comment.....
  3. #iR@


    wow! that was some thinking out into some AWESOME words! well done man! just hope u feel better soon! reps for u!(if i able to do that)
  4. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    good job ,but trust me dont wait. its not worth waiting
    because a right person will be with you always and never make u wait
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    well well

    Trust me dude...she is worth waiting for...
  6. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    well if she is worth waiting for dont wait till eternity cause if she makes u wait that long she is not worth it or ur not worth her can be either way. dont take it in bad sense
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Well Pamposh....no1 is worth waiting...when time dont wait for u...y u wanna wait for her...the more u wait the more u'll b hurt...believe me i hv been thru this hell...one advice frm me wud b....just dont wait for any1 in ur life...

    &yeah, nice poem.....expresses the sadness that u r goin thru.....
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Will think abt it.. thxs dude.
  9. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    i won't say ushud wait or not...cuz its ur personal preference.....and it depends on the depth of the feeling u have for her.......but don't waste ur life on something u may not achieve either...it sure is a tough question...

    well, the poem was amazing.....really nice... :beer:
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    well said

    very well said angela but life is nthng but ur hopes and desires drenched in ur emotions...u r happy wen u achieve them and ur sad wen u dont ....so lemme be sad even if idnt have wat i want coz i know thats a part of my life....thxs.
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i wont give you any advice pamposh.... even i know..wat pain is..
    i pray for you to get...everythng that u deserve..!! u dont have to walk alone everytime...

    poem is very good... very good...
  12. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very nice...Walk_Alone !

    Made me remember one of my poems...! May I share it with you ?

    Call for me…

    Often the name of who calls
    doesn't count…
    What counts is the power
    of the call.
    And what is worth is the fruit
    of the love.

    Listen, you stranger for so long
    Hide not for a longer time
    In the shade…
    My heart invokes you
    As the seed attends for the drop
    That will make it bloom…

    Call for me that I may feel you
    Call for me that I may answer you
    Listen, soul that I have recognized
    In the middle of thousands
    Call only once for me
    And I will answer for ever…

    Thanks and keep writing like this


  13. anashwin26

    anashwin26 New Member

    hey dude donno wer u r from or wat u do or wat ur name is but this is a sincere reply for ur poem . this is wat happend to me even and u'll be surpised to knw that even im WALKIN ALONE since past eight yrs i think , now am my engg final yr but still her thoughts haunt me as it was ever since. i knw the pain u r undergoin and these ppl need to knw that that pain so so really amazing
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I know dude, wen pain crosses all limits then it realy stops hurting and changes u completely in a diff man, a less complex and more loving creature.
    i must also say that somehow i feel its easier for gals to kepp thses things aside and live their life as if nthng happened..remember i said easier...but much difficult for guys do do it.

    I maybe wrong too but everyone waits till the hope dies its own death,

    thanks all of u...keep commenting on my stuff.

    wd be posting another one soon.
  15. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Nice composition....Amanush...keep it up.

  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nice poem, expresses very well what ur going thru...

    i actually get kinda disturbed n quite hate it if some1 who i dont love says that he's gonna wait for me forever or smthng..... but am not gonna give advice to ya :grin:
  17. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    ahhaaaa critic err i mean cryptic atlast..LOL

    Well cryptic try to think other way round and imagine someone hating u just coz u love that person...sounds depressing doesnt it.
    But its all upto u how u really take it coz a person who luvs u wd never make feel disturbed or depressed coz of him/her.

    And hey everyone i never asked for any advice LOL....iam happy the way iam...so plz stop advising abt me but yes offcourse do advise abt what i write.


  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    dude i didnt say i hate that person but i hate the thought of that person "waiting for me forever". and i wouldnt wanna be with some1 i dont love even if they love me, i find it selfish.
  19. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    i dint mean u wd do it......but its happening with me rite now...thts wat i meant anway.

  20. Seher

    Seher New Member

    Read your Poem its beautiful..

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