'Voice Of Silence...!'

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jan 11, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    I don't know if the fact
    of being met really means
    that we have found each other.

    Something in the air announces
    a storm that is advancing.
    Nevertheless the sky is perfectly serene.

    Sometimes I read on your face
    the same imprint of my fear
    and in your eyes the shiver of the time
    that will come to pass.

    But none of us has still uttered the word
    that makes the soul tremble.
    Yet for a while I have felt
    the presence of a silence in the middle of us.
    That strange one that is accompanied by our footsteps.
    And he has followed us as a troublesome shade
    piercing a thorn in the heart.
    In reality something is withering deep inside…

    Surely one day one of us will say that word.
    We won't even say goodbye
    and not even try to explain what happened among us.
    So from now on we know how something
    that would not have born is about to die.
    And we feel that to be found rather means
    that we have lost each other…


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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    An uncomfirtable/miserable feeling(when u r not able to speak for ur love) expressed in a very beautiful way....
    Wonderful is the word...for this poem...reps for u.:beer:
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

  4. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    @ Garima...! Thanks for reading and appreciating :)

    @ Nimisha...! Thanks and keep coming :)


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  5. #iR@


    great work man! :) reps for u! (if i can)
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    beautiful... ur an awesome poet!
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thats really deep.... felt as if its written on my life...
    Great work... keep witing !!
  8. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    some of the lines in here really made me tingle and i wont hesitate to say that when i read this:

    you made me shiver with a sense of knowledge. I think with that line you spoke for so many of us-if not me, atleast. Reps for you, dude. :grin:
  9. Darkwing

    Darkwing New Member

    The voice of silence

    I have felt her
    Soft, steady and true
    I come from the darkest of places
    All colors combined
    The rainbow no one can see

    Like you, my boss conjured me
    I bow to no one, except my boss
    Would you care to join the company
    Pray you be like me

    A little respect goes a long way
    When your talking with me
    I'd rather work at healing
    Are you into wounding?

    I'm just another warrior of the unknown
    Never misses the mark
    Never works alone
    Never pulls the trigger
    The boss does that

    Into killing?
    I'd rather not
    Principalities falling
    Choose to be incarnating
    Better that, than to be left behind

    Everybody ****s up
    Even Gods
    I'm not their judge
    And neither are you

    I can't forgive them that's not my job
    I have no idea what all they've done
    But if the boss
    So chooses to reprieve them

    Good for them
    The more the merrier
    I we party on to the next place
    So kid what have you got?

    Sorry, what's that?
    I tought you were saying something important

    I can be so cocky at times
    You little snot
    In the end
    I'm just aware like you
    Lets start from there

    Story up

    This traveller is out of here

    I was looking for the definition of the word amanush
    Guess that's you're name?
    Must have a very special meaning
    Parents always want the best for their children
    Especially when their naming them
    Tought I'd drop by
    And take the time to say high

    Hope you have a great day
    I mean it
    In the gentlest of ways

    Cheers Amanush
  10. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    state of mindish work..i believe!

    impeccable as ever..
    good to read
  11. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    the best thing i liked here is the title.. voice of silence... awesome.. amanush i m becoming ur fan..
  12. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    Too good to comment on. Saying anything more would be insulting it on my part.
  13. Angira

    Angira New Member


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